You are so mean. :) You give the small hope/joy of Prowl and Jazz's sparkling surviving but only now that everything else seems to be going wrong.
I know this is hard on Jazz but the scene with Blue was just heartbreaking. And Jazz not even reacting to Mirage is perhaps the most telling for how distraught he truly is. I'm not sure if I can wait another whole week to find out what happens next. :)
Bluestreak is distraught and confused, the twins are angry and confused, the crowd is generally upset and confused, and Jazz's staff... continue to be professional. But they're worried about their boss. They know Jazz well and they've never seen him react like this.
Oh, it's okay, the week will pass just like all the previous ones and suddenly it'll be posting day again. (Trust me, from my end they go by in an eyeblink, particularly when I haven't quite got the chapter finished!)
This may be pneumonia and oxygen deprivation speaking, but I just had this horrible thought that Alpha Trion is Asher. Please let me be wrong on this...but considering that he does so much manipulating behind the scenes.
Then again, hopefully it is a very very good thing Ratchet is going to see Alpha Trion. Hopefully he CAN do something to help.
All the sparklings survived! *cheers amid her whimpers* But Prowl doesn't know this *begins to whimper again*
I knew we were coming to this point, but it is still so hard to take. I have this utter trust in you as an author, to somehow bring us through, but there are going to be a lot of tears on the way. How many parts to this chapter? 6?
No comment on Asher's true identity - we'll find out very soon, though.
As for Alpha Trion, well he's been around a lot longer than anyone - if anyone can help in a way other than searching through the archives for similar situations, it's probably him, right?
Yay, yes all the sparklings survived. (And have gone on to live happy, peaceful lives, fall in love, have sparklings of their own, etc., not that any of that will make much of an impact on this fic) and no, Prowl isn't aware of any of it. And Jazz can't handle any more emotional stress than he's currently dealing with, even positive stuff.
I hope I live up to your trust. I think it'll be okay. Five chapters in this Part, so only 2 remaining, but there's also the final scene which will be posted as a separate chapter. Then again, I'll post that with 19.5 so it's still only two more weeks of SoaL. Then we'll know it all.
Alpha Trion, hmmmm? *has suspicions!*And I have to admit, I kinda wanted to beat Jazz over the head with the Clue Stick--he *knows* about Prowl's forcibly compressed childhood/frame upgrades, (and in fact he's the only one other than Prowl who does), and yet he STILL doesn't think that this might be pertinent for Ratchet to know? I know he's distraught, but dude--if he weren't so woobie right now, I'd have to smack a case of epic FAIL on him. (whether it's actually the root cause or not--my gut as a reader says it is, but even if I'm wrong, this is not something you hide from your doc in a situation like this! I've watched 'House', I know these things. XD
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Jazz is getting hit from all sides right now, and he's punch-drunk, not really responding to any of it. His entire focus is on Prowl, and Prowl's oblivious to him. An emotional ride? Oh my, yes indeed. All the way to the very end.
Uh, Quickspan, but yes. A really frustrating situation for him.
Oh. *hugs* It's okay. Two more weeks and you'll know it all, and then you can tell me whether you think the whole thing was worth it.
O.O You. Are. EVIL! XD Yesterday I was almost asleep when I remembered, tomorrow is Thursday! Was awake longer after that and couldn't wait XD
I feel so bad for Blue, he had wanted to tell Prowl alone about them, and always saw him like someone that would always be in his life, so this happening before he got to tell him is really sad.
Their sparkling is ALIVE! *happy dance* The poor thing! He finds out his creators are alive only to learn that one of them might die? T.T I hope he doesn't take Jazz's 'not now' as a rejection.
Shouldn't Jazz tell Ratch' about what really happened to Prowl in his younglinghood? That might be relevant. Ohooo when Ratch' does find out heads are going to roll.
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I know this is hard on Jazz but the scene with Blue was just heartbreaking. And Jazz not even reacting to Mirage is perhaps the most telling for how distraught he truly is. I'm not sure if I can wait another whole week to find out what happens next. :)
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Bluestreak is distraught and confused, the twins are angry and confused, the crowd is generally upset and confused, and Jazz's staff... continue to be professional. But they're worried about their boss. They know Jazz well and they've never seen him react like this.
Oh, it's okay, the week will pass just like all the previous ones and suddenly it'll be posting day again. (Trust me, from my end they go by in an eyeblink, particularly when I haven't quite got the chapter finished!)
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Then again, hopefully it is a very very good thing Ratchet is going to see Alpha Trion. Hopefully he CAN do something to help.
All the sparklings survived! *cheers amid her whimpers* But Prowl doesn't know this *begins to whimper again*
I knew we were coming to this point, but it is still so hard to take. I have this utter trust in you as an author, to somehow bring us through, but there are going to be a lot of tears on the way. How many parts to this chapter? 6?
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As for Alpha Trion, well he's been around a lot longer than anyone - if anyone can help in a way other than searching through the archives for similar situations, it's probably him, right?
Yay, yes all the sparklings survived. (And have gone on to live happy, peaceful lives, fall in love, have sparklings of their own, etc., not that any of that will make much of an impact on this fic) and no, Prowl isn't aware of any of it. And Jazz can't handle any more emotional stress than he's currently dealing with, even positive stuff.
I hope I live up to your trust. I think it'll be okay. Five chapters in this Part, so only 2 remaining, but there's also the final scene which will be posted as a separate chapter. Then again, I'll post that with 19.5 so it's still only two more weeks of SoaL. Then we'll know it all.
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I feel for Quicksilver, waiting to get to meet his creators but heck!~
I'm wibbling! My words no come out good now.
Much love for this story. Thank you!
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Uh, Quickspan, but yes. A really frustrating situation for him.
Oh. *hugs* It's okay. Two more weeks and you'll know it all, and then you can tell me whether you think the whole thing was worth it.
You're welcome.
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O.O You. Are. EVIL! XD Yesterday I was almost asleep when I remembered, tomorrow is Thursday! Was awake longer after that and couldn't wait XD
I feel so bad for Blue, he had wanted to tell Prowl alone about them, and always saw him like someone that would always be in his life, so this happening before he got to tell him is really sad.
Their sparkling is ALIVE! *happy dance* The poor thing! He finds out his creators are alive only to learn that one of them might die? T.T I hope he doesn't take Jazz's 'not now' as a rejection.
Shouldn't Jazz tell Ratch' about what really happened to Prowl in his younglinghood? That might be relevant. Ohooo when Ratch' does find out heads are going to roll.
GAAAAHHHH Must. Survive. Another. Week
CAN'T WAIIIIIIIIIIIT! ^.^
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