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taralynden

[Fic] Foreign ways (3)

Sep 03, 2010 05:39

Continuation of Foreign ways

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Comments 18

renegadewriter8 September 2 2010, 20:28:08 UTC

I love this. Made me cry! I love how protective Jazz is here and gahhh evil Praxian customs!! Great job couldn't stop reading!

taralynden September 3 2010, 06:27:43 UTC

I did warn that tissues might come in handy. Prowl's safe now in Iacon, and we all know he's better off with Jazz :)

shadyferret September 2 2010, 23:56:03 UTC

I really like this fic, especially how it starts off where Prowl's already taken. Not a normal obsticale and yet I really like how you pulled it off.

taralynden September 3 2010, 06:28:48 UTC

Thanks ^_^ I didn't want people to hate Rapidfire, because he's as much a victim of his upbringing as Prowl, but of course our Prowl is destined to be with Jazz, so sadly it had to end.

shadyferret September 4 2010, 01:57:25 UTC

It shows you didn't want Rapidfire to be the bad guy because there were several instances where you could've easily made he mean but you didn't. For the times he is a jerk I could see how it was more from Praxian society than just himself. Much kudos for pulling off a difficult idea where the antagonist isn't really the bad guy but rather his upbringing :)

taralynden September 4 2010, 02:12:39 UTC

Thanks :)

BTW - love your cat icon. My last cat looked a lot like that, though my current one is black and white... ;)

Thread 6

prowlsgirl September 3 2010, 00:41:55 UTC

It had it's very sad moments but it had a very happy ending. ^_^

taralynden September 3 2010, 06:29:20 UTC

It had some very sad moments, but I'm glad you liked the ending - there's a bright future ahead of these two. :)

bluebirdsoaring September 3 2010, 01:15:39 UTC

Beautiful ficcy!! Prowl and his life vs Jazz and freedom!!

The mental image of him walking back to Jazz...poor mech. But it all turned out well in the end...off to the bonus scenes...I'd love to see more in this verse =)

taralynden September 3 2010, 06:30:21 UTC

Thanks!! ^___^

It was not an easy experience for Prowl in any sense, but he's safe now. More? Well... maybe. We'll see.

purajo September 4 2010, 01:37:24 UTC

Awww poor Prowl, but he's safe now and soon his name's not gonna matter.

Love seeing Jazz all fiercely protective. He's awesome like that.

taralynden September 4 2010, 02:14:02 UTC

Prowl's safe, Jazz'll take good care of him and will happily stand in the way of anyone who has a problem with it.

Jazz is often awesome :D