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[tarajcl]

Title: This Generation
Universe: Beast Wars, Season One
Summary: Whatever happened to class? Rattrap, Dinobot, sex, crude, short and charmless. Just me musing on TF gender. And probably going to hell.
Warnings: Rattrap would like it clarified that he absolutely isn’t like that.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

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Comments

[seiberwing]

You are so much win for this.

[tarajcl]

<3

[shiome]

Fanning myself furiously right now, thanks. GUH.

[tarajcl]

:D (I actually intended to put a lot more porn in this than there ended up being. Where did all my porn go?)

[koilungfish]

Good, very good indeed. You have a couple of spelling errors, but it doesn't distract from an interesting take on TF gender, an enjoyably in-character slice of Rattrap and Dinobot, and a well-crafted exhibition of sexual tension.

[tarajcl]

Oh bugger. Right you are. *goes to correct* Thank you! Glad I got the sexual tension in- thought maybe all the wordage got in its way. Gladder I got the in-characterness.

(Also I like your writing bunches, can I friend you?)

[koilungfish]

The most obvious ones are "strange alien plant" early on and "deficient" spelt "deficit" twice near the end.

Yeah, there's tension in there. It's conveyed by the wordage, not blocked by it.

Of course, of course :) Just don't expect to see anything up for a couple of weeks at this rate O_o

[tarajcl]

*edits like a ninja*

[clankclankboom]

I don't actually know beast wars that well but I liked that.
I really like the gender ideas, and the taboo-ness and creative people working their way around physical difficulties.

Plus it was adorably sweet. And hot.

~Boom.

[tarajcl]

Aw, thank you!

[syntia_13]

oh my insanity.
I nearly exploded from the laughing in loud (you can't really laugh OUT loud when you're supposed to be doing translation for your boss, and not reading dirty fics on office hours).
These are the boys I know and love, and the gender-idea is close to my heart too. And the way you went from fun to awkward to 'who, me? never! let's do it' to adorable awww-ness is made of win.
I demand more BW stuff from you! Please?

[tarajcl]

Solution: translate dirty fic for your boss!

More?

...:D