[tf2] - Slainte Mhath, Slainte Mhor

[tanyartblog]

Title: Slainte Mhath, Slainte Mhor
Rating: PG
Pairing: none, gen (Solly&Demo)
Warnings: weirdness, langauge, War-Update spoilers
A/N: I had this idea/story in the back of my head for the longest time, so I wrote it when I shouldn't have.  It's different, but I'm glad I got it off my chest. Inspired by  this gorgeous Band of Brothers fic. Thanks topellucere for

Comments

[renquise]

Holy crap, I love this so much. Your Soldier voice is so, so good, and oh my god, Tavish and Jane just about break my heart. I just love the way you can make maybe-haunted boots touching and a little heartbreaking. And the introduction of first person at the end! Ahh. Ahhhhhhh. &hearts &hearts

You’re also going to - whack - not kill yourself, and - whack - visit my mum, and quit talking to your fucking boots like they’re haunted.

This whole bit is just-- yes. So perfect.

[t_lyrical]

Oh man, 'Haunted boots' alone sounds like a pretty ridiculous and lulzy scenario. I'm happy that I was able to kind of pull off the POV switch, since god only knows how much time I spent puzzling over it. Thank you so much! :D

[indigo_x]

Oh my god. This was... It... jeez. It makes me wanna cry, it makes my heart hurt, and it's probably the most beautiful 'fic for these two I've ever read. You deserve a medal.

[tanyartblog]

Awww, shucks. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)

[flipthefrog]

This was great, and one of the best effective uses of second-person narrative I've ever seen (nice fakeout!) So nice to see some Solder & Demo fic for once.

[tanyartblog]

Thanks! It was my first time using second-person narration, and it's a pretty tricky thing to use, I find. But I'm happy you enjoyed it!

[your_name_here3]

Oh man, it's perfect!
I loved the way you used POV so much)
I haven't got any words to discribe my delight.
Oh, and can I translate and publish this one?