wow, thanks I guess. I never thought I'd get such feedback. I wrote this like, 4 months ago, it was something on my mind that had to be written. I'm thinking about writing a companion piece, with Dean's pov.
Your house burned down for the third time in your life, but really, it's okay, because you're home again. That sentence is just...wow. Like this whole story. I really liked the thoughts written in italics from when they were still together. Great job :)
Thank you so much ! The thoughts in italics were inspired from a great author in the Pretender fandom, Blade Mistress. If you like the fandom, you need to read them, my writing is poor and weak compared to hers.
Oh man, this was amazing. I love the rhythm, everything just flows so naturally (you'd never think English wasn't your first language!). It's angsty and it gives great, succinct explanations for the girls in the show (lol), and really, just. Guh.
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That was absolutly amazing and you know what? I'm totally speechless.
I love how tortured and guilty Sam feel, thank you for sharing and Dean, oh poor hurt Dean. *whimpers* So much love for this fic.
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I wrote this like, 4 months ago, it was something on my mind that had to be written. I'm thinking about writing a companion piece, with Dean's pov.
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That sentence is just...wow. Like this whole story. I really liked the thoughts written in italics from when they were still together.
Great job :)
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The thoughts in italics were inspired from a great author in the Pretender fandom, Blade Mistress. If you like the fandom, you need to read them, my writing is poor and weak compared to hers.
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Thanks for writing!
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