Comments | tango65: The Weekly Obbo Challenge #43(A) - Naked

tango65

The Weekly Obbo Challenge #43(A) - Naked - "Naked fear"

May 06, 2010 21:13

* pairing: bodie/doyle, * challenges: the weekly obbo, * fiction.

Comments 10

draycevixen May 6 2010, 15:11:23 UTC

There's an awful lot of story in so few words here. I do love the idea of a brooding Bodie pondering what he saw and of course the ending makes me very happy.

Thank you. :D

tango65 May 6 2010, 21:40:54 UTC

I was surprised that it came together so quickly. Sometimes I think the boys write their own story. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

etain_antrim May 6 2010, 16:34:15 UTC

Terrific use of the multiple meanings of the prompt within a judiciously chosen 200 words! Very well done!

tango65 May 6 2010, 21:41:39 UTC

I was amazed that I could tell the story in so few words. I guess it was self-edited in my head before fingers got to keyboard. Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

inlovewithboth May 6 2010, 17:40:46 UTC

I love the way they make things right in the end, always together.

tango65 May 6 2010, 21:42:05 UTC

Couldn't be anything else! I love happy endings for our boys. Thanks for the comment.

saintvic May 6 2010, 20:59:30 UTC

A whole story in 200 words and one with a wonderfully happy ending. Thank you.

tango65 May 6 2010, 21:42:19 UTC

You're welcome and thanks for reading.

miwahni May 7 2010, 12:10:18 UTC

Clever you, getting the prompt in both the first and last sentences. And what came between was so very fine!

tango65 May 7 2010, 20:54:51 UTC

I didn't even realise I had used the prompt in the first and last sentence - well picked up. I just try to use the prompt a few times throughout. Glad you enjoyed it!