There's an awful lot of story in so few words here. I do love the idea of a brooding Bodie pondering what he saw and of course the ending makes me very happy.
I was amazed that I could tell the story in so few words. I guess it was self-edited in my head before fingers got to keyboard. Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
I didn't even realise I had used the prompt in the first and last sentence - well picked up. I just try to use the prompt a few times throughout. Glad you enjoyed it!
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There's an awful lot of story in so few words here. I do love the idea of a brooding Bodie pondering what he saw and of course the ending makes me very happy.
Thank you. :D
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