Comments | tango65: The Weekly Obbo Challenge #41 - Blue

tango65

The Weekly Obbo Challenge #41 - Blue - "Black and blue"

Apr 20, 2010 10:12

( Black and blue )

* pairing: bodie/doyle, * challenges: the weekly obbo, * fiction. *genre: h/c

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tango65 April 20 2010, 10:31:29 UTC

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate the feedback. Glad you enjoyed it.

draycevixen April 20 2010, 11:11:27 UTC

Awww, this is actually very sweet for story with such a great description of drowning.

Thanks! :D

tango65 April 20 2010, 11:24:59 UTC

Who knew that drowning could be sweet? :) Thanks, I'm glad you found it was sweet.

miwahni April 20 2010, 12:31:02 UTC

he convulsed and expelled what felt like the entire Thames River from his lungs, all over his partner's back.
I can just imagine Doyle doing this - and Bodie just taking it. Great work.

tango65 April 20 2010, 12:33:54 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad I could convey their relationship so well in a few words.

shooting2kill April 20 2010, 13:12:16 UTC

What a lovely piece of writing! I really enjoyed this and all your uses of 'blue'. Thank for the post.

tango65 April 20 2010, 13:13:50 UTC

I'm glad you picked up all the blues - I try to make good use of the prompts.

Thanks for the feedback, its much appreciated.

inlovewithboth April 20 2010, 19:17:38 UTC

Oooh scary. I don't think I took a breath while reading it. Thanks Tango.

tango65 April 20 2010, 21:19:55 UTC

Good thing it was short then, lol, wouldn't want you passing out.

Thanks for the feedback!

inlovewithboth April 20 2010, 21:25:20 UTC

Gasp, gasp, gurgle. S'okay, m'fine now!!!

tango65 April 20 2010, 21:27:43 UTC

Just as well, my long distance "rescue breathing" is rusty. Next time I'll send one of the boys.

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