The Weekly Obbo Challenge #23- Knot - Heart strings

Nov 27, 2009 11:32

Doyle watched as his partner slept. There was nothing happening at the place they were assigned to observe and hadn't been all day. So instead he turned to watch his partner as he slept, the man who was inextricably tied up with him in every way imaginable. Partner, both at work and at home, they spent every waking moment together, to the point ( Read more... )

* pairing: bodie/doyle, * challenges: the weekly obbo, * fiction

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miwahni November 27 2009, 11:10:59 UTC
*sweet*

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tango65 November 27 2009, 11:20:08 UTC
Thanks, its also short. :)

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sc_fossil November 27 2009, 11:53:36 UTC
ahhhh, how nice. *sniffle* Thanks!

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tango65 November 27 2009, 12:00:40 UTC
You're very welcome - its nice to do a quickie for a change. :) Glad to know its appreciated too.

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saintvic November 27 2009, 12:51:45 UTC
tied up in one complicated, knot, one that Doyle had no intention of doing anything to untie - this is a lovely image *g*.

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tango65 November 27 2009, 22:55:27 UTC
Thanks. As soon as I read the prompt, I knew that was how I was going to use it.

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robeau November 27 2009, 13:39:04 UTC
The heavy sigh you hear is from me - so much emotion provided in just 100 words. Delightful!

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tango65 November 27 2009, 22:56:28 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad I was able to convey the feeling in such a short time.

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draycevixen November 27 2009, 15:56:52 UTC

That's very sweet without being too cloying.

Thanks. :D

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tango65 November 27 2009, 22:58:46 UTC
Glad you liked it. :)

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