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Fic Update

Feb 15, 2009 11:57

Title : THE SPLINTER INSIDE ME
Characters/Pairing: Jack. Mention of Nine, Rose, Ianto.
Rating: Mild PG
Spoilers: General, for 1st Season
Disclaimer: Not mine; they belong to RTD and to the BBC.
Summary: Written for the prompt for Day Two of redismycolour. The waiting is worse than dying

Your name is the splinter inside me
While I waitWinter ( Read more... )

redismycolour, angst, challenge, jack

Comments 39

hab318princess February 15 2009, 12:14:34 UTC

wonderful, left me speechless in a very good way

tanarian February 16 2009, 17:34:56 UTC

And that kind of comment makes me soooo proud! Thanks!

holdingoff February 15 2009, 14:09:32 UTC

whoa.

Can we send this to BBC and say, "hey, looking for a clear look into what drives Jack Harkness? Here- read this."

tanarian February 16 2009, 17:36:52 UTC

Thank you! I really felt for Jack, abandoned and trying to do the right thing for an ungrateful Time Lord. No wonder he has abandomnent issues!

vipersweb February 15 2009, 14:44:36 UTC

this is gorgeously painful. I love Jack's pov in this and the very real emotions he feels.

tanarian February 16 2009, 17:37:52 UTC

It's a miracle that Jack isn't ten times more screwed up than he is. The Doctor is damned lucky that Jack is the forgiving sort because I would have seriously damaged the stupid sod.

vipersweb February 16 2009, 17:55:35 UTC

*g* I think a lot of people feel that way about the Doctor. Between his treatment of Jack and Martha and his sobbing over the Master, he's damned lucky his companions still love him and want to travel with him.

tanarian February 17 2009, 08:57:48 UTC

I used to adore the Doctor but now it's soured. He uses people until they can't take any more and then he accuses them of abandoning him and breaking his heart.

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talcat February 15 2009, 14:48:07 UTC

It's you!
I love this this is perhaps my favorite part: For the first time Jack’s beginning to hope that the Doctor won’t come just yet. And that is something that terrifies him more than anything else.

Makes me go all awwww Jack.

How have you been? Drop me a line when you get five.

tanarian February 16 2009, 17:38:43 UTC

Yes, I'm still alive... sort of. I don't have much internet access these days and my damn computer is broke but I will try and get you an email ASAP.

mellyj February 15 2009, 15:26:33 UTC

Perfection!

tanarian February 16 2009, 17:39:02 UTC

High praise! Thank you, it's very much appreciated.