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tamoline

Falling part 7

Aug 03, 2011 13:05

Title: Falling (part 7)
Author: Louisa and Tamoline
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criminal minds, emma/emily, fanfic, emily, x-men

Comments 8

jijibebe August 3 2011, 16:41:42 UTC

"Maybe her mutant ability is sex"--had me rolling at that one! Definitely loving the dinner scene--oh Emma, such a troublemaker! I have a feeling Morgan's going to lose this challenge.

tamoline August 3 2011, 19:00:20 UTC

Yay! Our first comment since the LJ-pocalypse. Thank you for being one of our regular commenters.

As for Morgan? I really guess it depends on how you define 'lose.' Or 'win' for that matter.

lady_finx August 3 2011, 23:26:31 UTC

ohhhh i love it!!!! Emma just ooozes sex :)
fucking love the ending!! all i can think of is rocky horror picture show lol!

tamoline August 4 2011, 07:51:29 UTC

Glad to hear you're enjoying it. And, yes, the ending is a Rocky Horror reference. :)

cirroco_desade August 4 2011, 03:27:41 UTC

very nice.

yet somehow I feel like Emily... squirming, knowing you are torturing me but enjoying it a bit too much.

two or three days? but, but, LJ might fall apart again!

Oh, I'm seriously curious about JJ's motivations too! lol

Thanks for this.

tamoline August 4 2011, 07:59:00 UTC

Well, I guess at least you are enjoying it. :)

If for whatever reason LJ is down, I do have an AO3 account that I update as well, so you can check there instead.

And, yes, JJ... :)

mauders August 4 2011, 10:47:51 UTC

You know what I laughed at? The line

"In the meantime, in the world outside my head". This is me...

Loved this chapter. The way you built it up right to the very end. Emma...woooo!

tamoline August 4 2011, 11:53:36 UTC

It's pretty much me most of the time too. (Though I think that line was actually Louisa's.)

Thank you for commenting so regularly. It does make writing the stories much easier.