The Hunt, part 2 of 4

[tamoline]

Title: The Hunt (part 2 of 4)
Author: Louisa and Tamoline
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds
Pairing: Emily Prentiss/OFC

Although Faces is technically a sequel to this story, you may want to read it first anyway:
Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 5 Part 6 Part 7 Part 8 Part 9

The Hunt:
Groundwork

Comments

[nonpresence]

Boo for not being able to edit my code fail out of my last post.

You really do write cleanly. I did find a couple of typo-ish mistakes that I included in my list so I thought I’d just reinforce that I find the writing quality high.

[tamoline]

"... what the sheriff was thinking when she called you in on this!"

This was actually as intended on our part. It was supposed to have been part of a sentence that probably went something like:
"I have no fucking clue what the sheriff was thinking when she called you in on this!"

That being said, I can see why you thought it was a typo. Possibly we should have added an extra word from the original sentence.

I might play with the partial divider, and see how it works. The main problem, I guess, would be that I'd feel obligated to try and use it throughout. Not sure there.

We actually tried to do a lot of mirroring throughout the piece. I'm not sure how well it came off. (For instance, in the first piece, there were a couple of places where we used similar wording to try and play that up.)