Faces part 8 of 9

Jan 11, 2011 00:10

Title: Faces (part 8 of 9)
Author: Tamoline and Louisa
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds
Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Disclaimer: Not my characters. Not my pairing.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7

A Lullaby for Dead Children )

criminal minds, emma/emily, fanfic, x-men

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scoutnabout July 14 2011, 07:56:58 UTC
That's a pretty cool ending. Their big fight was a fun shift and then them both getting help from psychologists as they're both psychologists (but I know for a fact, that doesn't lead to 'inner peace')is a great way for this to go.

A couple idle thoughts I had while reading are that Emily would likely look into a disaster of that magnitude (school bus of children) or already be familiar with it and also that -- though Emma has come a long way in the trust department -- Emma still hasn't opened up to Emily in the name and mutation realm: that should be a really interesting follow-up story.
Thanks for writing, it's been fun and quite an emotional journey. Good complexity of emotions for the characters.
Please continue :D

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tamoline July 14 2011, 08:51:13 UTC
Is this a good time to point out that this isn't actually the end of Faces, there's one more chapter left to go?

As for your comments about Emily - you might very well think that, but I couldn't possibly comment. I would, however, note that Falling does cover a lot of this story from Emily's perspective.

Again, thanks for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Lol scoutnabout July 14 2011, 15:31:37 UTC
Let's just say I like doing things the hard way ( ... )

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Re: Lol tamoline July 14 2011, 16:04:25 UTC
Heh. Possibly I should improve navigation by putting link to the next part down the bottom of each part.

Thanks for the insights. I did appreciate them, I was just a little amused for reasons that you will doubtless come to.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the sex scenes. They're the first we've ever written (and by we I mean Louisa -- I still haven't) and it's good to know that they worked. They're probably original because Louisa hasn't really read much smut before, so she's using her own words for the most part.

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