His Heart's Desire Chapter 2: The Kidnapping

[tammsla]

If anyone knows how to make an LJ cut straight to my journal, so it'll click straight over here and I don't have to try to post all of this to a comm, PLEASE let me know xD I made a monumental mess of it over on Norribeth :S

Chapter II: The Kidnapping

Title: His Heart’s Desire

Author: tammsla

Beta: teh amazing saime_joxxers, who nudged me repeatedly

Comments

To the rescue!

[saime_joxxers]

I got it covered, tammsla, no worries. ^^

Just give me as sec, and I'll get it set up for you.

Re: To the rescue!

[tammsla]

Thank you!! You are SO my favorite person :DDD

[saime_joxxers]

Hahah. -pose- I try!

Kidding. ^^

But I sent you an e-mail. See if it works out. Were my instructions clear AT ALL? xD

Anyways, if it works, you can prolly just delete all the stuff on norribeth and just post this one thing. Lemme know if it fixes anything.

[june7rose]

An auspicious beginning! I look forward to more. I particularly like the description of the face on the coins as a "death head" which is truly what it was and the aptly named "Snake."

[tammsla]

Thank you!! :D

[saime_joxxers]

I love the new additions to it, by the way. In case I've forgotten to tell you a zillion times like it deserves. xD ^^

[tammsla]

You're a wonderful beta; I know you were kind of nervous about working on this, but you've got some great insights and I don't think you let one error slip past you :D Thanks again!! :D