lost the plot

Jan 22, 2015 19:02

A man stares at his desk. It's a nice desk, mahogany and huge and really probably an unnecessary purchase, but the unmistakable sign of someone that is Doing Well. He stares at the things surrounding the desk in his office - the bookcases, the high school trophies, the row of medals, the plaques and commendations and awards. He stares a bit at the ( Read more... )

love and loss, fiction, ljidol, life and death

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kickthehobbit January 23 2015, 02:02:57 UTC
This is sweet. :)

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talon January 28 2015, 23:35:31 UTC
Thanks :)

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delicate_lines January 23 2015, 04:30:10 UTC
You've captured the emotions well in this piece.

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talon January 28 2015, 23:35:37 UTC
Thank you :)

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jem0000000 January 23 2015, 04:55:30 UTC
Awww. :)

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talon January 28 2015, 23:35:42 UTC
:)

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swirlsofblue January 23 2015, 16:37:45 UTC
Heart-wrenching throughout. Such a somber tone of monotonously striving forwards.

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talon January 28 2015, 23:36:10 UTC
I just hope I do not end in a position of regret when it's my time to go.

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fodschwazzle January 23 2015, 16:48:42 UTC
It's a familiar narrative, looking back for lost time, but it almost never fails to evoke emotions in me. This one, especially, was a captivating thread to follow to its conclusion. Excellent work.

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talon January 28 2015, 23:36:28 UTC
Thank you, sir.

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