Worthy of a name

[talon]

There is a certain moment in twilight when the light and the darkness vie for supremacy

Comments

[talon]

thank you! it was sort of a departure from the norm for me, but I'm very glad it worked for you :)

[impoetry]

This is absolutely breathtaking good sir. Wow.
This is precise and calculating.
This is wonderful.

Well done.

But if you make me panic by posting at the very last minute again, I might get grumpy.

Good luck, and go MAN-POWER!

[talon]

I think I do my best work up against a deadline.

And man-power, sure, but I think writer-power, more than that. May the best writer win? ;)

[roina_arwen]

I love your evocative descriptions and am a fan of much of the stories & universes that you made mention of. This was a beautiful piece - well done!

[talon]

thank you!

[myrna_bird]

This just has to hit home in the heart of any of us who have ever written anything. Use of second person made it read so personal. Lovely. Lovely.

[talon]

-bows- thank you very much!

[halfshellvenus]

I love the use of language in this, and how much of the bond between reader and writer is the sense of being understood-- either because the reader sees the true meaning of what was written, or because the writer sees into the true heart of the reader.

[talon]

:) thank you!