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Last Chance Before The Kill

Jun 25, 2010 01:19

Title: Last Chance Before The Kill
Author: TalliW
Pairings: Sarah/Lester
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Primeval is the property of Impossible Pictures. I write just for fun.
Acknowledgments: Thanks to the lovely Fredbassett for beta duty.
Summary: Sarah and Lester sitting, er standing in a storage room, fucking...;)

AN: Written for Bella farfalla who wanted ( Read more... )

sarah page, james lester, het, primeval, sarah/lester, author:talliw

Comments 18

lukadreaming June 24 2010, 23:33:38 UTC

You haz committed hot het!

And LOL at No, Lester was not really her type, but he was better than a battery-powered rubber toy.*g*

talliw June 26 2010, 09:04:49 UTC

Thank you. Writin´g a little het now and then is fun.
And I think Lester is better as all the sex toys.;)

rusty_armour June 25 2010, 03:27:12 UTC

Oh, cool! A Sarah/Lester story! I've sometimes wondered what they would be like as a couple and I think you've just answered my question! :-)

I think this story works really well because the Sarah and Lester have sex for a plausible reason. They're both hiding in a storage cupboard from creatures that could easily tear them apart. The adrenalin is racing and it's quite possible that they have nothing to lose by surrendering to their hormones, as they could be dead soon. In any case, the sex was hot! It was fun seeing Sarah initiate the whole thing and remain very much in control.

It's great that the smell of sex actually saves Sarah's and Lester's lives as the future predators go off to procreate! And I think it's hilarious that Sarah left a note for Lester asking for a repeat performance! *g*

talliw June 26 2010, 09:08:16 UTC

It's not a pairing I would ever have thought of without Bella farfalla. But it was fun to write.

nietie June 25 2010, 07:08:10 UTC

Ooh, hot het! *fans self*

Lester has hidden qualities, hehe. I can understand Sarah prefers him over the big pink dildo named Gabriel LOL

talliw June 26 2010, 09:11:04 UTC

It seems Sarah knows to appreciate Lester's hidden qualities and wants more of it. At least dildo Gabriel can't get jealously.;)

fredbassett June 25 2010, 11:45:03 UTC

LOL at the big dildo called Gabriel! *g* and yay for hot het! I loved the way you set up and ended this scenario, and the note was great.

talliw June 26 2010, 09:15:42 UTC

Thank you. Once they were inside the storage room the story almost wrote itself automatically. I seem to have a thing for storage rooms. A lot of the rare pairings I write about seem to end in one of them.;)

bella_farfalla June 25 2010, 16:46:38 UTC

Oh HELL yes! :D I am so glad there are lovely people on Denial who will indulge my occasional desire for het. XD

That was haaaaawt!!! And LOL Gabriel!!! Hahaha I love that you even got some Jenny/Sarah in there too!

You're amazing, thank you sweetie! :D

I will stop abusing exclamation marks now.

talliw June 26 2010, 09:22:52 UTC

You're welcome. Without you I certainly wouldn't have thought of that pairing. Surprisingly I enjoined writing it a lot.
At first it almost might even have become a threesome story. A desperate Jenny bunny tried to muscle in. But I found the storage room might be a little small for such activities. Perhaps I can find a more spacious place next time.;)