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talliw

Primeval WIP: Recuperating 26/...)

Apr 03, 2009 23:27

Title: Recuperating 26/...)
Author: TalliW
Pairings: Lester/Cutter
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Primeval are the property of Impossible Pictures. I write just for fun.
Lyle and Ditzy belong to Fredbassett.
Acknowledgments: Thanks to Fredbassett for beta-reading. I couldn't have done it without you.
Warning: Mentions of violence!

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stephen, ditzy, slash, lester/cutter, connor, jenny, abby, lyle

Comments 19

lukadreaming April 3 2009, 22:03:36 UTC

This is so dark and tangled!

By the way, I think you've left a paragraph of the beta in (it's in the section where Ditzy is speculating about what the drug might have been).

talliw April 3 2009, 22:09:37 UTC

Mmh, I've checked it over and I didn't see anything wrong. Please, just point me out to the right sentence...

lukadreaming April 3 2009, 22:28:52 UTC

I've re-read it and I think the paragraph may be correct (it's the one with University of Bristol in), but it's missing quote marks at the start, which is partly what confused me! Sorry!

talliw April 4 2009, 07:11:07 UTC

I didn't add quote marks to that passage because it's a continuation of his talk. I just insert a break for better reading.

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knitekat April 3 2009, 22:57:19 UTC

Angst and more ansget. Loved Stephen, Jenny and Abby trying to help here. Hugs James for his nightmares.. brave stepping in to Nick's room without backup. That last line is very true.. hugs all of them.

talliw April 4 2009, 07:12:52 UTC

Sorry for the angst.
I know I'm terrible.*hides*

sunsetdawn20 April 3 2009, 23:38:28 UTC

Oh dear. Poor Lester. That last sentence hurts.

talliw April 4 2009, 07:11:46 UTC

*hugs*

fififolle April 4 2009, 07:46:18 UTC

*flaps and flails*

Oh! Stephen was great, and Babyface was brilliant.
Oh, what's going to happen!!!

talliw April 4 2009, 09:46:35 UTC

I'm glad you're still on board.:)

fififolle April 4 2009, 09:50:21 UTC

Wild horses and all that...
*thinks* You don't have any mpreg lined up do you? or death??! Because if there's death count me out. *nods seriously*

fredbassett April 4 2009, 07:51:45 UTC

I loved Stephen in this and the way he's trying to help Lester.

The last line was one of your "packs a huge punch" masterpieces. You really do know how to end a chapter! *happy sigh*

talliw April 4 2009, 09:50:45 UTC

Thank you. *blushes*

I think Stephen grows on me through all the nice stories here, more as he did ever in the show.
The Primeval writer really should take a look in Denial, but perhaps they do already.*thinks magnetit/magnesit in Devil's Crowll*