Essentials

Apr 28, 2012 22:31

Title: Essentials
Author: TalliW
Characters: Helen Cutter
Rating: K
Wordcount: 1054
Disclaimer: Primeval is the property of Impossible Pictures. I write just for fun.
Acknowledgments: Thanks to Fredbassett for beta-reading.
Summary:  Helen can live without modern items. But does she really want to?

AN: The story was inspired by lsellersfic's great meta ( Read more... )

helen cutter, author:talliw

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dreamer_98 April 29 2012, 03:38:01 UTC
Very nice. Great look at Helen's struggles and her means of survival, but also how she enjoys the challenge. I like especially the bit about the cooking pan and Bowie knife belonging to her parents, and how those items are the only things that connect her to them.

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rodlox April 29 2012, 03:49:14 UTC
!HELEN!

pure awesomeness, this is - just like Helen.

poor Helen's parents, though.

I like how you have her mentally checking her inventory and what she needs.

though I admit, when the cramp hit her, my first thought was "Helen's pregnant?!"

excellent writing.

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joshinator April 29 2012, 07:34:20 UTC
Awesome Helenness.

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fredbassett April 29 2012, 11:05:05 UTC
Aw, the bit about the pan was very poignant.

Lovely look at Helen.

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celeste9 April 29 2012, 14:46:14 UTC
This is a great glimpse of what Helen's life on the other side of the anomalies might have been like. I liked the touch of sentimentality with the pan and the knife.

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