Universe: India

May 25, 2004 08:39

Universe: India - Part 3
Title: Maharajah
Author: deleerium


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aquila0212 May 25 2004, 07:30:54 UTC
Oh Dee, how exquisite. What incredible tension you build up by making this progress so slowly. What beautiful torture. Can't wait to read more. Thanks SO much for this -- I needed it today! MWAH!

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deleerium May 27 2004, 04:21:38 UTC
oh, you are ever so welcome! and thank you for the wonderful compliments -- i'm so glad it helped make a bad day better :)

luv, D

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divafits May 25 2004, 07:46:10 UTC
huh.. umm.. whew! *fans self* geez.. that was um.. yeah..
I really shouldn't have read that at work and ummm...yeah..

Oh and *whaps you* WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT THERE???!!!

Just kidding *pets*

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deleerium May 27 2004, 04:22:55 UTC
*rubs butt* ow, woman! i'm tender there...

*snort*

left it there cause it was a good stopping point-ish and i was DYing to post it, sheesh. *hugs* for the 'whew', babes :D

luv, D

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cat_attack May 25 2004, 08:24:26 UTC
I am blown away by this! *blinks* Gorgeousness... I can't find all the words to describe how this made me feel. This has been such a beautiful story! The depth of detail is stunning. Seriously, have you thought about writing for a living? Damn, I'd buy your books! *much snogging*

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deleerium May 27 2004, 04:26:06 UTC
Seriously, have you thought about writing for a living? Damn, I'd buy your books!

omg thank you! it's an amazing compliment for you to say you'd spend perfectly good money on my boy porn, luv *snogs back* and though i don't write novels, per say, i do actually write for a living (boring, technical researchy writing, but still...writing). :D

luv, D

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cat_attack May 27 2004, 08:08:18 UTC
Ah, so the boring technical writing plugs up that creative fountain of writing... reserves it like an oak barrell holds a new wine. And then, when you sit down to your computer... *bang* an explosion of gloriously descriptive delicious fiction! hehe... maybe it's not quite so simple to produce, but I love it... all of it!

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rhapsody May 25 2004, 10:17:26 UTC
Do I really have to say how beautiful this all was? Because..really...it was. (Wow, not a good fb from me today!) The detail..it was like I was seeing it happen right in front of me, and could touch the tension

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deleerium May 27 2004, 04:27:37 UTC
it was like I was seeing it happen right in front of me, and could touch the tension

*snoglick* wow - that's a fantastic compliment, thank you darling! SOOOO wonderful to hear that the story is that real. *beams* i'm falling more and more in love with this uni every day ;)

love, me

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stumphed May 25 2004, 10:34:05 UTC
I don't know what's hotter. Everything they just did with the blindfold still on, or the fact that he had gone howmanyyears without touching himself.

*guhguhguh*

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deleerium May 27 2004, 04:29:22 UTC
*twitch*

guh, um yeah. *snogs for the hawtness compliment* don't think tales and I weren't all *insert keyboard mashing* when we were figuring out that particular...plot twist. *twitches again* i'm starting to develop a fascination for aroused!blindfolded!orli...(thank gawd) ;)

love, me

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talesinbloom May 27 2004, 10:54:11 UTC
ALSJDFKLSJDFK KASDKF.......jaskjdfsjdf?....jasdjfksjADJLASD!

Yis, I believe so.

*snerkLICK*

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