FIC: Not In Chronological Order (3/3)

[talepieceuk]

TITLE: Not In Chronological Order (3/3)
AUTHOR: Talepiece
RATING: 12 cert/PG-13
PAIRING: Sarah Jane/River
DISCLAIMER: I own them not. Please sue me not.
NOTE: This completes the initial story, though there will be more with this pairing.

Comments

[not_only_a_girl]

If possible, this is even better than the last chapters. It's nice them being on the same footing. I like the way it adds a whole new dynamic to the situation.

And 'Now would be a good time to run, Sweetie,' was fantastic. It actually made me laugh out loud to myself :)

[not_only_a_girl]

Erm, also, possibly a slightly odd request, but would you mind if I played around in the little Universe you've created here? Only I've got this fic idea based around this relationship. It's just a little one-shot and obviously I would send it to you to have a look over before I ever thought of posting.

If you are even remotely uncomfortable with this idea, please say so. It's just that I reeeeally love what you've done in this fic. xx

[talepieceuk]

Thank you so much for the feedback!

Feel free to play in this universe; I look forward to reading your fic.

[not_only_a_girl]

Thanks!!