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"…Perchance to Dream" - Chapter One by Cathleen

Mar 10, 2007 07:49

Pippin doubts his usefulness to the Company, but someone very unexpected tries to make him understand his worth…

Marigold’s Challenge 38

Setting: Pass of Caradhras

Elements: A pair of boots, a star, a dead frog

Beta: Llinos and Marigold

“…Perchance to Dream”

“This will be the death of the halflings!”

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Comments 5

dreamflower02 March 11 2007, 02:17:47 UTC

What an ingenious way to get your elements into your story!

ceshaughnessy March 16 2007, 02:39:12 UTC

Thanks Dreamflower! Glad you thought it all came together,
Cathleen

pippinfan1 March 11 2007, 12:25:43 UTC

Oh, that poor unfortunate frog, lol! This story is wonderful and moving along rather nicely! I'll continue on once *my* gnawing stomach is seen to, lol.

PF

pippinfan1 March 16 2007, 02:40:14 UTC

Thank you Pipfan! I hope you like the conclusion as well!
Cathleen

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ceshaughnessy March 16 2007, 02:42:25 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! I owe a debt of gratitude to both Llinos and Marigold for their welcome suggestions in that area.
Cathleen