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"…Perchance to Dream" - Chapter Two by Cathleen

Mar 10, 2007 07:38

Pippin receives a great gift…

“Dizzy!” Pippin shrieked with excitement as he streaked down the green hill at full speed, at last stopping to scoop up his beloved puppy as Dizzy gambolled about his feet in anticipation. “Oh, Dizzy.” Pippin rubbed his face in the soft fur and sighed happily. The pup obligingly licked his hands in greeting and then ( Read more... )

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dreamflower02 March 11 2007, 02:20:07 UTC

So Pippin's foresight was a gift of the Queen's cat? That's a very clever explanation!

I liked the way you showed his confusion, at the strange circumstances in his dream. For that is just the way it sometimes *is* in dreams!

ceshaughnessy March 16 2007, 02:45:48 UTC

Well, when I was researching cats for "Cat of a different colour" I read that calico cats were revered and had the ability to bestow their power of foresight on others. So, I thought it would be a cool idea. Thanks for your FB!
Cathleen

shirebound March 11 2007, 02:25:00 UTC

you are a good lad. Your thoughts are pure and you seek to care for those whom you love, be it with your songs and humour, or your gentle touch and indomitable spirit. You must not give up. You are needed.

What simple and heartfelt reasons! I love this very much.

ceshaughnessy March 16 2007, 02:46:54 UTC

Thanks so much for your comments, they are very much appreciated! I'm so pleased you liked it,
Cathleen

garnet_took March 12 2007, 03:12:03 UTC

Interesting dream; very vivid and a little unsettling.

You have definitely come up with the most original explanation for Pippin's Foresight that I've seen. Well done.

ceshaughnessy March 16 2007, 02:48:09 UTC

Thanks! I like writing dreams, you can do anything in them! And I love the idea of second sight, I'm glad I finally had a chance to use it.
Cathleen

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ceshaughnessy March 16 2007, 02:48:59 UTC

Glad you liked it! And many thanks for the kudos!
Cathleen

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ceshaughnessy March 16 2007, 02:52:44 UTC

I appreciate your generous comments so very much! How kind of you to say such nice things about my story. I'm flattered you liked it so much! Interesting stuff about frogs, I had no idea but that's very cool. And I would love to cross post it for you as long as I can figure out how to do it! Thanks again!
Cathleen

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ceshaughnessy March 17 2007, 13:29:47 UTC

Ok, I'll give it a go! I may come knocking for some help though, I'll let you know!
Cathleen