Teacakes and Hats by Songspinner

Jan 07, 2007 20:55

Merry arrives at Bag End just in time for a party...

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grey_wonderer January 7 2007, 21:25:45 UTC
I love the way Merry and Sam talk about the door to bag End and share their memories. It seems so natural. I enjoyed this very much and Rose was dear in it with her talk about 'children of all ages' when they mentioned the fireworks.

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songspinner9 January 7 2007, 22:37:47 UTC
Thank you! "Natural" is a good word to see in a review, truly.
And I think Rose was quoting myself, actually...although I'm not sure if it was from a family gathering or the staff room at school. :)

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shirebound January 7 2007, 21:51:46 UTC
Lovely. There aren't enough scenes between Merry and Sam, and this conversation is very sweet and natural. Oh, and I can totally picture Merry and Pippin in their fetching new hats! :D

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songspinner9 January 7 2007, 22:38:42 UTC
Glad you liked it! Yeah, I wish I knew a fanfic type artist who'd do a picture of that... (hint to any such reading this...)

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pippinfan1 January 7 2007, 22:23:42 UTC
That was just lovely! I can understand how that sweet scene at the end of ROTK could inspire this wonderful tale. I do enjoy Sam and Merry's friendship! The whole scene from Merry walking in the door all the way to Rosie volunteering to clear up was done brilliantly and very smoothly. Wonderful!

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songspinner9 January 7 2007, 22:39:42 UTC
Well, at first I thought maybe Peter had forgotten that Sam lived at Bag End at that point, but then I thought, "nah..." and decided it was the back door to the place. I'm glad the flow of the storytelling worked well, as I was somewhat unsure of that.

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ceshaughnessy January 7 2007, 22:59:42 UTC
Wonderful! I can just picture the scene, and the ever so subtle reference to their journey added just the right touch.
Cathleen

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songspinner9 January 8 2007, 01:49:26 UTC
Many thanks! The front door thing was interesting, because I saw the photo and sighed, and then at 11:30 p.m., just as I was going to sleep, had to get up and jot down the idea. Good thing I have an understanding husband... :)

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