FIC: Utopia 15/? (WIP)

[takmarierah]

Title: Utopia
Fandom: X-Men: First Class
Pairings: Charles/Erik
Genre: drama, angst, au, dystopia, future!fic
Rating: R
Word Count: 8300/?
Warnings: dubcon, emotional manipulation
Summary: Based on this 1stclass_kink prompt (and originally posted there).

"Erik has succeeded in taking over the world, but mutant utopia has yet to materialize.

Comments

[na_neni_nonun]

I don't like where Charles' thoughts are going at the end. I just want you to be somewhat happy and shaggy with Erik and perhaps save the rest of the world too. And although I'd have found the bj with Azazel incredible hot it was clear that Erik would stop them, Charles really wasn't thinking, was he?

Also I cannot tell you how much I liked the dancing, it even turned into a cuddly hug! <3 Oh Erik, of course you're relaxed now, because Charles is yours, isn't he? (Really curious as to what he was going to say first. 'You're my ...'?)

[10other_words]

I just wanted to say this was one of my favorites. Just the detail placed in this setting it wonderful. Plus, I always don't know what to expect every chapter.

makes lots of noises

[anonymous]

I literally cannot handle this chapter. The noises that I made while reading this.

Badger, she is cool. Exchange with Emma was interesting.

But then, that ten second conversation with Azazel. I had my hands over my mouth and I don't even know what sounds would have been coming out anyways. And then Charles' watch started moving, and I made it away from my laptop and to my bed before I squid-flailed.

Shocking. Also terrifying and scary. Mostly shock. But like...I mean, it made sense. But I also like WHAT THE HELL?! FLAIL

I just, incoherence. I AM INCOHERENT. I WANT TO FINISH THE CHAPTER, BUT I THINK I HAVE TO GO MAKE MYSELF TEA FIRST. AND MAKE SURE I'M NOT BROKEN. (I'm sure I'm fine. I just react strongly to things. And this. THIS. I CAN'T EVEN. I HAVE NEVER BEEN THIS I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO OVER A STORY.)

Sorry, weird comment is weird? I will leave something coherent later. Tea now.

Re: makes lots of noises

[anonymous]

Tea helped.

My goodness, dear author. The way the play off each other: the craziness, the emotions.... It's so good. It's insanity at its finest.

"but his eyes-god, his eyes-" *curious chipmunk look* Is it love?

What's Charles planning?

If I was clever and coherent right after reading excellent fiction, I would make a metaphor about you writing stories like playing an instrument, always striking the right chord, even when it's not the one I expected. It the piece that comes together is glorious. Oh, I guess I just did manage to kind of make that metaphor? Anyway, I bask in wonder at your work.

[anutty1]

Excellent chapter!

[laury_kos]

I dunno how to express myself, again, omg
when I saw the update!!all the feelings in the world!!!