Many Faces of Love

Nov 13, 2007 19:34

I hope you are enjoying the Many Faces of Love poem series.  Thank you for your comments.  You can see them all along with the Zodiac series on my Memories.

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faces of love, poetry

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purplealert November 14 2007, 04:39:57 UTC
I came to comment you, and I got distracted by your poetry. :D Are you sure you can't write fanfic? o.o I bet you could. These are really good. :) Seriously, poetry is super talent. I know I could never do it, not well at least. >>

Anyway, to my original point, I finished the "Duel of the Senses" story. It just needs to be beta'd. And I thought, since you proposed the plot-bunny, I should ask you first if you wanted to. :) And if you don't or can't, I promise that I won't be offended.

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takhen November 14 2007, 06:32:58 UTC
Thank you for the kind words. I have tried Fanfic, but I can't seem to get the dialog or characters right. I end up going in circles. I will keep tho hehe. Poetry on the other hand seems to flow well for me.

As to Beta. I have never beta'd a story. I am not all that comfortable with sentence structure and spelling and all that stuff. I would hate to mess it up.

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purplealert November 14 2007, 07:19:15 UTC
You're welcome. :D

That's cool. I just thought I would ask. ^.^

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takhen November 14 2007, 07:23:08 UTC
Thanks. I am really looking forward to this.

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mysticsoblivion November 14 2007, 09:18:19 UTC
Once again, dear, you leave me ashamed. Just beautiful- simple and intense... and that last line, gods I love a good play on words especially when the outcome is so vivid!

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takhen November 15 2007, 01:30:13 UTC
Thank you. You caught that great. It was actually the foundation for the poem. Glad you liked it.

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jasonsnene November 16 2007, 02:18:53 UTC
Wow! That was...steamy...to steal one of your words. Love the camel shaped shadows and the last line...perfect!

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takhen November 16 2007, 02:28:15 UTC
Thanks much! I had fun with it as well. I think its a pretty steamy line too. Humm wonder if Oz would make a nice rug? Comfy

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jasonsnene November 16 2007, 02:30:03 UTC
I sure would like to find out! Mmmm....Oz....

Hope you don't mind me spamming you with comments tonight. Finally had a few quiet minutes and wanted to take the time to really appreciate your poems. :)

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takhen November 16 2007, 02:32:41 UTC
Always love hearing from you. Hehe think I have spamed you more than once :)

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takhen November 16 2007, 02:34:27 UTC
Great. I have read your fic and loved it. Would be honored to have you on my Flist. Hope you don't mind me adding you as well. Thanks for the wonderful comment.

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takhen November 16 2007, 02:41:51 UTC
Sweet dreams

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