Fic : Eat Me 2/? (Pinto, NC17)

[takhallus]

Title : Eat Me
Fandom : Pinto
Rating : This part G, overall NC17
Word count : 2085

Summary : Zach owns a smoothie bar in Silverlake, but a new arrival in town might trouble his business, and his pants.

Part one

Comments

[karmic_fic]

WONDERFUL! i love the backstory... and zach's befuddled 'do you think i should stay open late?' was ADORABLE.... i was all.... no sweetie... he's trying to get in your pants

but oh! i can feel the tension start to build.... this is going to be SO BAD when chris starts advertising.... although zach has no one to blame but himself for his assumptions

(since it worked so well last time) keep it coming!!!

[takhallus]

I am rattling away on this so should be tomorrow, thanks so much for reading!

[3988akasha]

I'm loving this so much. Poor, clueless, hipster Zach trying to make a business run. I'm loving to not love Chris right now. He's just so scheming and yet adorable. Also, the tension between the boys is incredible, with Chris reaching for his hand, and maybe asking him on a date. I can't wait for more of this so...updates now please? *hopes*

[takhallus]

Updates now! Part 3 is up

[3988akasha]

*adores you*

*hugs*

[medea_fic]

Oh my God. This is AWESOME. The back story is brilliant and I am fully in love with invested in both characters. ALL characters, actually, including Eliza and Karl (who hasn't even been onscreen yet!).

Okay, off to part three...

[dineru]

I am so apprehensive about where this is going. XD But Zach is cute when he's out of his depth, so it all evens out!

[inu_spockya]

oh, dang, this is fun!! *off to read part 3* \o/ moar Pinto, woo hoo!!