Comments | takhallus: Father's Day

takhallus

Father's Day - for bloody beary

Mar 21, 2009 16:48

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rating: nc17, fic, mpreg, lyle, gift, sylar

Comments 13

chosenfire28 March 21 2009, 17:37:15 UTC

Holy hell, I am blown away by this. I have never liked this pairing, mpreg squicks me, and well, not liking the pairing but you made me love every single thing about this. This story is very well written, all the characters are developed, and wow the whole story behind how he can get pregnant is nothing short of brillaint. I even loved the relationship between Sylar and Lyle, it was beautiful and believeable. Also, I really enjoyed the confrontation between Bennett and Sylar. You did an amazing job with this and if you ever have the urge to continue this verse I would definitely read.

takhallus March 21 2009, 17:44:13 UTC

Wow thankyou, that's very flattering! I'm not a fan of mpreg myself but when I was writing it I found it could actually be pretty touching, especially from the angle of unwanted teenage pregnancy.

I may continue it at some point because I'm quite curious as to whether Sylar could really change enough and what might occur between this point and the events of I Am Become Death.

Thanks again for reading!

yoruichiyoshi12 March 21 2009, 17:45:53 UTC

OH, I like this pairing! Mommy Lyle lol, how cute.

takhallus March 21 2009, 17:58:18 UTC

He makes a cute mum doesn't he XD

Thanks for reading x

bloody_beary March 21 2009, 17:52:59 UTC

Dear god woman!! *loves fic completely* If you wish to continue this, please tell me so I now have two series to drool and obsess over. This whole fic is pure beutiful poetry, although Lyle's first reaction made me scared for the baby until I realized that for someone his age a baby was a terrifying and life-changing thing. Please, please, please do a few more things in this world, it's so cute and triumphant!

takhallus March 21 2009, 17:59:40 UTC

Aw, I'm glad you like it, Happy Birthday!

I think I'll definitely write more, I want to see how it ends lol

bloody_beary March 21 2009, 18:05:03 UTC

YAY!!! *tackles, glomps, huggles* Thank you for the wonderful fic!! ^_^

wickedpurrz March 21 2009, 19:16:54 UTC

Wooooooooooow. That was so pretty and sad and pretty that a tear came out! That seems to happen a lot, lol. Bloody_Beary got an awesome prezzie! Lucky lucky!

takhallus March 22 2009, 00:19:21 UTC

I LIVE FOR YOUR TEARS! LOL

Thankyou so much, I'm glad you liked it. x x

flwrpwr_vampyre March 21 2009, 20:26:55 UTC

Wow, I normally avoid male preg like woah but I saw your name and knew I had to give it a shot. I'm so glad I did, you wrote it perfectly and at no point did I feel the emotions weren't what you'd feel in this situation so yeah, amazing story!

takhallus March 22 2009, 00:20:17 UTC

Aw that's a real compliment! Glad your gamble paid off XD