Comments | takhallus: Strike A Pose (High School AU)

takhallus

Strike A Pose (High School AU)

Feb 10, 2009 22:31

Gabriel pushed his glasses up on his nose and pulled at his constricting shirt collar. Behind him the rest of his Biology class slouched and kicked against the wall, waiting to be let inside. Gabriel hated these last period classes. Everyone was giggly and stupidly excited about school letting out, and this was the time he was most likely to ( Read more... )

mohinder, fic, gabriel, high school, oc

Comments 32

aurilly February 10 2009, 23:17:27 UTC

God oh god. If I have a weakness, it is for Mylar high school AUs. And I love this one because you are brave enough to really set the stage with lots of other characters and introduce it and not even have Mohinder appear in this one. I love Wes and Monica (loved that line about swallowing... took me two reads to get it and then I snorted with laughter). I love that you have Gabriel's dad---usually only his mom is there. I love the 90s references, like 90210 and My So-Called Life.

I'm going to be looking SO forward to this!

takhallus February 10 2009, 23:37:24 UTC

Thankyou!

So glad you like it and that you think it's ok that Mohinder hasn't shown up yet. I felt I needed to establish where Gabriel was in his life before Mohinder came and turned it all upside down!

I loveed writing his dad, I called him Martin and then...bingo! They called him Martin in the show! Weird.
x

to_question February 10 2009, 23:39:23 UTC

I love!!!!! More, please. Pretty please.

I want to give you a more constructive, well structured comment but I can't think beyond the chorus of MORE! I WANT MORE! that is reverberating through my brain.

takhallus February 10 2009, 23:42:04 UTC

LOL I have another few chapters ready to go, so maybe soon... Thanks so much for reading!

pyjamagurl February 10 2009, 23:45:30 UTC

I love this! It is so fun ^__^ Gabriel is so adorably geeky <3

I can't wait for more, including the introduction of Mohinder xD

Great fic! ^__^ (and now I can go to bed with a grin on my face xD)

takhallus February 11 2009, 00:00:08 UTC

thanks! Mohinder is in the next bit, he's not like "our" Mohinder LOL

greyelveneyes February 10 2009, 23:56:29 UTC

I'm loving this concept! :D

takhallus February 11 2009, 00:00:50 UTC

thankyou! started as a stupid one shot based on the Ugly Duckling and it..... grew LOL

you tease abordantoinette February 11 2009, 00:14:38 UTC

i got so excited when i saw this! LOOVE!!! especially the opening scene. can't wait for the next chapter! i like the good-ole-boy quality of his dad, too. and i can't wait for more of gabriel's first mohinder encounter!

gabriel <3<3<3

that's freaky about the dad's name

Re: you tease takhallus February 11 2009, 00:17:51 UTC

I know right? *Shivers* He was named after my workmate's son!

Thanks for the love x