Undercover Part 4/4

Jan 29, 2009 21:45

Gabriel stared at the harsh grey building from the guts of a wrecked ferryboat on the waterfront of Lake Champlain. The Roberts Dockyard wasn’t your typical dockyard at all, just home to a disused ferry station, but easily unnoticed from the far shore of the lake. There was no sign of movement and his racing adrenaline was sending his abilities ( Read more... )

fic, porn, undercover, rating: nc-17, humour, fluff

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darkqueenakasha January 30 2009, 00:07:18 UTC
Yay! Great finish.

"and you spent the whole weekend holding hands and giggling like schoolgirls. Good job agents."

lol

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takhallus January 31 2009, 12:05:11 UTC
Thanks for the prompt in the first place! I've had so much fun writing this!

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perdiccas January 30 2009, 01:57:48 UTC
LOVED IT! Awwwww the sex was hot and sweet, and I love that Gabriel had all those doubts and that Mohinder called him on it.

Loved that they basically suck as agents and that HRG had to save the day, because I could totally see that. HRG is the only competent one in the whole Company. :)

Great final chapter to a great fic! <3

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takhallus January 31 2009, 12:06:10 UTC
I had to put HRG in there, he's the only one who could have saved them. And a little jealous Peter is always good XD

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shimmeree January 30 2009, 03:51:03 UTC
YAY FANFICTION!

This was great fun! Excellent job.

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takhallus January 31 2009, 12:06:49 UTC
Cheers lol I broke the fourth wall. Oopsy! XD

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eridanie January 30 2009, 05:18:55 UTC
OMG! This is so great!
Oh I love the conlusion, and the hot hotness smexing! and how cute they are together! and Noah at the end! and OMJG mentioning fanfic at the end Ghahahahahhahahaha!

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takhallus January 31 2009, 12:07:37 UTC
Cheers for reading, glad you liked!

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blossommorphine January 30 2009, 10:00:59 UTC
To finish up the comment on the last chapter (because all my work caused me to miss that previous gem and I went back to read it before this one), I love it because it is both emotional without doing a head job on me. A perfect fic to come home, drink some hot chocolate or pumpkin tea, and relax and leave behind all your worries. It's sweet, it's cute, a dash of crack, a hint of tongue-in-cheek (bad, cracky fanfiction reference ftw!), and it still takes itself seriously enough to pull off a smexy pron scene that is just so yummy. Oh yes, there is just that quality of 'good for the fangirl, good for the heart' stuff. Maybe that seems silly or nonsensical, but that is how I feel. I am just grooving to this, feeling all at peace and dreamy.

<3

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takhallus January 31 2009, 12:08:24 UTC
Thankyou so much! The accompaniment to hot chocolate and pumpkin tea is a big compliment XD

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