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takhallus

Undercover Part 3

Jan 05, 2009 21:58

( Memories of the previous evening broke like morning over Mohinder as slowly but surely each of his senses engaged. )

angst, fic, undercover, rating: pg13, fluff

Comments 29

perdiccas January 5 2009, 23:29:00 UTC

Yay! An update! I loved the teasing and the tickling at the start and then, oh! You made my heart ache for poor Gabriel D: And poor Mohinder, he's so cute when he's all confuzzled. GO, GO, GABRIEL! SAVE YOUR MAN!

takhallus January 6 2009, 20:07:24 UTC

Confused Mohinder is the cutest x Glad you like! :D

doctor_caduceus January 6 2009, 00:31:43 UTC

Dude! I love when I ask for things and get like nigh-instant gratification. Love this, love you, loved the twist. For a moment it seemed like it was getting too easy, and of course, that's when you turned it on its end. *giant snuggles of joy*

takhallus January 6 2009, 20:08:57 UTC

You know I'm your bitch, you ask you get. Now go and write more SAINT SEBASTIAN! *Cracks whip* :D

I tried to give them 'easy' but my evil angsty brain wouldn't let me.

levitatethis January 6 2009, 00:43:36 UTC

Yay! You updated this story! Are you trying to kill me with the cliffhanger? You are...mission accomplished. How am I suppose to hang on until the next update ( ... )

takhallus January 6 2009, 20:13:26 UTC

Thankyou! Trying to keep on top of the serials. Why do I start them?!

Off to write more, I want to know what happens lol

speccygeekgrrl January 6 2009, 20:05:02 UTC

AAAAAAAAHHHHHH

This is SO GOOD. The balance between sexual tension and hilarious teasing is perfect, and it still has the awesome plot and mission stuff. This is an incredibly well-rounded story! ♥ Moar soon plz?

takhallus January 6 2009, 20:14:16 UTC

More soon, I promise! For a change I actually know what's going to happen. Next will be last chapter though, I think. LOL.

bloody_beary January 6 2009, 21:12:23 UTC

*grins* Can't wait for next part!!

takhallus January 6 2009, 22:33:35 UTC

soon, soon!