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aurilly December 17 2008, 04:36:14 UTC
Oh my god. Kill me, why don't you? I'm seriously having trouble breathing, I'm trying so hard not to sob.

In addition to this Mylary gorgeousness, I also liked the vague backstory you had this taking place in, and how the other deaths created a sense of urgency for Sylar in protecting Mohinder. This was beautiful, just beautiful.

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takhallus December 17 2008, 09:28:51 UTC
Cry, my pretties, cry!

Thankyou for a lovely comment x

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megmatthews20 December 17 2008, 09:35:41 UTC
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Damn you!

It was gorgeous. It was depressing. It's gonna have me sobbing to myself in the bathroom in a minute...

I hate you. Which means I loved the story. Which means I don't really hate you at all...

cheers...<3333

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takhallus December 17 2008, 09:43:28 UTC
Hee hee, I love you too

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brandinsbabe December 20 2008, 03:50:35 UTC
awwww damn! that was so incredibly sad!!! you broke my heart!!! god this was beautiful.

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takhallus December 20 2008, 15:57:09 UTC
Thanks! xD

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blaidd_drwg December 20 2008, 12:34:10 UTC
I took a chance, because I'm not normally one for death fics, but I'm really glad I did. It was sweetly sad and oh, so touching.

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takhallus December 20 2008, 15:56:52 UTC
Thankyou! Glad you took a chance on me :D

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angary December 23 2008, 02:02:08 UTC
I really liked this one! I liked the visual imagery of it and the dark tone that you went with. This seemed like a creative and different way of fulfilling the challenge prompt, and I think you did an awesome job at it!

Poor Mohinder :(

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takhallus January 2 2009, 21:36:25 UTC
Thankyou so much! Sorry I'm only just getting round to replying to your comment, it's so nice of you

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