Comments | takethesky87: Heroes fic: Mohinder Suresh and the Quest for the Cure (4/8)

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Heroes fic: Mohinder Suresh and the Quest for the Cure (4/8)

Dec 08, 2007 13:37

Title: Mohinder Suresh and the Quest for the Cure (4/8)
Characters: Mohinder/Peter, Noah, Nathan, Sylar, the Haitian; cameos by most of the (surviving) Season 1 cast
Word Count: 28,000ish
Rating: PG-13 for mild language, violence, some non-explicit romance-y stuff -- nothing worse than what you'd find in Raiders. Also, character death -- if you've ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

meli_64 December 8 2007, 21:09:14 UTC

"Aspes, very dangerious. You go first." Oh Sallah! I mean, Noah!

Sad about the fact that Nathan didn't had Peter wear a pretty dress and like the prevet he is watch him change. ;)

Really super great! :D Can't wait for the next part. :D

takethesky87 December 9 2007, 01:06:18 UTC

Heehee, unfortunately Nathan and Peter were too busy with the talky-talky for there to be any mention of frilly white dresses or drinking contests. :P

Thanks for the feedback! Next chapter will be up tomorrow. :)

smilebackwards December 10 2007, 03:38:03 UTC

This rocks. I love that Peter and Nathan still try to protect each other even though they're on opposite sides.

And my God, Sylar is amazingly evil! That's awesome. :)

takethesky87 December 10 2007, 03:45:52 UTC

Yay! So glad you're liking it. :D Peter and Nathan have a really strained dynamic right now, but yes, deep down they are still brothers and care deeply about one another. I'm glad that comes through. :)

And Sylar was a lot of fun to write, so I'm glad you think he's "amazingly evil", hee! Thanks for reading and commenting, I really do appreciate it!! Next chapter should be up within the hour. :)

brighteyed_jill January 24 2008, 05:40:13 UTC

"Asps. Very dangerous. You go first." This is one of my favorite lines in all of cinema, and one I use on probably a weekly basis. Love that it's preserved here.

Nathan's protectiveness of Peter was touching. And of course he's scared of Angela-- who wouldn't be? Liked the moment of Mohinder standing silhouetted by the dig site. Very Big Damn Hero moment.

And Nathan's not as much of a bad guy as he might be. Still quite morally gray, certainly, but not a complete failure as a brother.

Hooray snakes!

takethesky87 January 25 2008, 01:21:52 UTC

Liked the moment of Mohinder standing silhouetted by the dig site. Very Big Damn Hero moment.
It was such an iconic moment in the movie, I couldn't not include it. Although I was a little concerned that it would feel unnecessary in the story ... but I'm glad you liked it. :)

And Nathan's not as much of a bad guy as he might be. Still quite morally gray, certainly, but not a complete failure as a brother.
Morally gray, definitely. I see him in a semi-HRG role in this fic, getting into the Company for good reasons at first but now questioning his decisions. And Peter always throws a wrench into things. :)

Thanks for leaving feedback, I appreciate it!