Heroes fic: Mohinder Suresh and the Quest for the Cure (2/8)

[takethesky87]

Title: Mohinder Suresh and the Quest for the Cure (2/8)
Characters: Mohinder/Peter, Noah, Nathan, Sylar, the Haitian; cameos by most of the (surviving) Season 1 cast
Word Count: 28,000ish
Rating: PG-13 for mild language, violence, some non-explicit romance-y stuff -- nothing worse than what you'd find in Raiders. Also, character death -- if you've

Comments

[smilebackwards]

I adored this chapter.

I love Peter and I'm very intrigued by his dynamics with Nathan and Mohinder. Hopefully everything works out happily... Keep up the fast updating because I need to know what happens! :)

[takethesky87]

I'm glad you're intrigued by Peter's interactions with Nathan and Mohinder, since both those relationships will factor pretty heavily in the fic as a whole. And as for the updating bit, you're in luck -- since I won't be near the computer much tomorrow, I'll be updating with Chapter 3 in a few hours. :D I plan on getting a chapter up every day so that I'm finished by 12/12, the reel_heroes due date.

Thanks so much for reading and for leaving feedback!!

[pyjamagurl]

Awesome!! I loved the appearance of Sylar and I am glad that he managed to escape.

I look forward to more ^__^ this is an interesting read!

[takethesky87]

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it! Sylar will be back, that's for sure. :) Thanks for your feedback!

[meli_64]

Oh I'm loving this. When I'm reading Peter, I hear the Marion theme in my head. (You also used my favourite line in the movie, so thank you) This is so great! I can't wait for the next part. :D

[takethesky87]

Eeee! My music choice for this entry was completely deliberate, that's for sure. *g* I'm glad you're liking it so far, and thanks for the feedback!

Also, as for that favorite line -- perhaps, "Never thought I’d see you come walking back through my door"? I do enjoy that line from the movie, if that's the one you're thinking of. :D

[meli_64]

Actually it was, "C'mon back tomorrow." "Why?" "Because I said so that's why. See you tomorrow, Indiana Jones."

I don't know why, but that's like my favourite part in the movie. I think it's the way she says it.

And the, "Never thought I'd see you come walking back through my door." is like top five. Oh Marion, how much you rule. I hope she gets awesome lines in her Cameo in the next movie (Especially since it seems she's had Indy's kid)

[takethesky87]

Aaaah, yes, that part too! Oh Marion, how are you so cool? I'm looking forward to seeing her in the 4th movie, for sure. She's the only right woman for Indy -- just like Peter's the only right guy for Mohinder, hee :)

[tracker_lucifer]

You are brilliant. Just have to say that. Love Indiana Jones <3 You're making me want to rewatched the movie. Lovely job, and Mo is angsting for his man! Awwww...

Bravo. (also, I like the fact you gave Mo a whip and made him a bit alarmed by his adoring student)

Can't wait for the next chapter. :3

[takethesky87]

Oh yes, Mohinder misses his Peter, the poor guy. :) And thanks for reading and for the great feedback! Chapter 3 should be up in a couple of hours. :D

[brighteyed_jill]

Oh, the bar scene. Oh, Peter. Those are just the greatest lines in the world ("Never thought I'd see you come walking back through my door" and "See you tommorrow Mohinder Suresh."). Oh, the angst with the Peter/Mo history and his ties to his brother! The fight scene was great, and what a wonderful use of Sylar. Burning the memory of those heiroglyphs into his brain is like burning them into someone's palm, right? You continue to rock my socks off.

[takethesky87]

Burning the memory of those heiroglyphs into his brain is like burning them into someone's palm, right?
Yep! Whee, so happy to hear you're still enjoying it. Thanks SO much for reading and leaving feedback!