fic: Your Daddy's Rich and Your Ma Is Good-looking (Rusty/Danny)

Sep 06, 2006 00:12

Title: Your Daddy's Rich and Your Ma Is Good-looking
Author: victoria p. [victoria @ unfitforsociety.net]
Summary: There's a reason they're called confidence men, and doubt has no place in their world.
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Recipient: chicklet_girl
Notes: Thanks to mousapelli and luzdeestrellas for handholding and betaing. Title from Gershwin's "Summertime ( Read more... )

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Fic: Your Daddy's Rich and Your Ma Is Good-looking rosewillread September 7 2006, 11:13:12 UTC
I love your Danny and Rusty and how they are with each other - all they never say.
And the idea of the return to familiar ground, and Rusty's fingers on the back of Danny's neck.

Also: Rusty smiles back as best he can without ever moving his mouth.

Excellent.

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Re: Fic: Your Daddy's Rich and Your Ma Is Good-looking musesfool September 11 2006, 14:21:55 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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stefanieincork September 7 2006, 11:57:51 UTC
Summertime love! <3

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musesfool September 11 2006, 14:22:35 UTC
*g*

and the living is easy.

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chicklet_girl September 8 2006, 04:43:56 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *runs around excitedly*

So many great insights into Danny and Rusty, and how Rome changed some things and let other things be.

Everything they do is a metaphor, a signifier, a stand-in for something else that doesn't exist until they create it, and then only because other people believe the lies they tell.

You're the only writer I know who can use semiotics in an Oceanfic story. *loves*

but right now he wants fried dough covered in powdered sugar.

Well, duh. Fried dough covered in powdered sugar is the best thing EVAR. (Um, yes, I did go to the State Fair last week. Ahem.)

They ride the Tilt-a-Whirl next,

OMG the Tilt-a-Whirl is my absolute favorite! And now I can combine it with this image: He eases away, drapes an arm around the back of the car and lets his fingers brush over the hair on the nape of Danny's neck. Yowza.

"I'm hurt that you think I'm a snob."

"You are a snob."

"No, I just have high standards."

Heeeee!

Rusty smiles. "That sounds familiar," he says, and lets Danny pull him close for ( ... )

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musesfool September 11 2006, 14:27:46 UTC
I'm so happy you liked it. *G*

I was originally going to do the bookstore prompt, because eee! bookstores! but I just couldn't make it work, and the amusement part, and the funnel cake and the idea of them always going, even dressed in Armani, was too good to resist.

You're the only writer I know who can use semiotics in an Oceanfic story. *loves*

Hee!

I once built a whole Firefly story around the definition of "oxymoron" so... *g* I'm glad that worked for you, because it was kind of the heart of the story, where I finally understood what the hell I was doing.

OMG the Tilt-a-Whirl is my absolute favorite!

Mine, too! *g*

That was just so spot-on, how they have to kind of negotiate their way back together without being able to talk about it, because they are not the talking kind of people, and their propensity for hotel rooms and Danny's knowledge of Rusty's eating plan and just everything. Thank you so very much.

Thank you so much. I'm so happy you liked it. *g*

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rulebreaker_31 March 18 2007, 20:07:18 UTC
He curls his fingers into Danny's hair; it tickles his palms and he gasp-laughs into Danny's mouth before pulling away to press his face against the side of Danny's neck and breathe.

That made me smile. Thanks!

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musesfool March 19 2007, 20:22:52 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting!

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nightengale June 13 2007, 01:30:45 UTC
*prrrrrr* Meitachi's been pimping out your oceanfic since the 13 came up, and though out of the trilogy I've only seen 12, I still know that I adore what you do with these boys. Mmmm~

(And yes, the hand on the back of his neck was so very perfect, rrrr. ♥)

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musesfool June 20 2007, 21:31:27 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

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