Behind Their Dorkness (continuation) Preface

[takelo14]

Author: takelo14
Pairing: YunJae, YooSu, Changmin/Krystal
Length: 0/? (it's a preface, doesn't count as a chapter)
Rating: PG - nc-17
Genre: School, Drama, Humer, Sexual(some chapters)
Summary:
A group of friends meet by faith, each weirder than the other. One, is obsessed with his beautiful hair, one is a self-called master of jokes, the other a

Comments

[takelo14]

i hope that someone reads this X^

[yuki_3]

Omo... that's a new approach ;D
I think I like the new addition to the story .. I started it without really thinking about the plot XD *hides in shame*

but I have a little comment .. when you write a story, focus on the grammar.. if you write is past tense, then everything should be in past tense..
for example:
Jaejoong nodded and found yunho's hands in his. He sighed and realized how perfect his life is.
it should be (his life "was" )

I had the same problem before and after some help with my beta I got better .. I advice u to find a beta and after she beta your chapter, ask her about what u did right and wrong and how can u improve .. and re-read ur chapter and the beta-ed one ^^

other than that, can't wait to read ur version

and sorry for being so late D8 .. will send u the chapters now ^^

[takelo14]

thanks for the advice! ill definitly keep that in mind!!!
T.T ik im not the best at writing but i do enjoy it XD
thanks again (and please follow the story :D

[angel_lv_dany]

i love this fic, i'm glad someone decide to continue ^^

[takelo14]

I know I loved it too :)
And thanks for reading and commenting XD
It means alot since it's my first fanfic EVER

[minnie_lover]

awww i love YunJae they are meant for each other :D