A Twisted Tale (SEQUEL TO FAIRY-TALES DON'T EXIST)

Dec 16, 2010 19:54


Title: A Twisted Tale (SEQUEL TO FAIRY-TALES DON'T EXIST)
Author: takelo14
Pairing: Yunjae
Length: One-shot (2,034 words)
Genre: Violence, Angst, Horror?...
Rating: PG 13
Warning: tragedy, psycho,  abuse, blood ,

Summary: "He was nothing but a puppet to me, a mere part of the show. I broke up with him just because..."

A/N: to people who haven't ( Read more... )

fic: a twisted tale, genre: character death, genre: violence, length: one-shot, pairing: yunjae, genre: angst

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yunho_ism December 17 2010, 01:19:45 UTC
Ninja Spot. :P

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yunho_ism December 17 2010, 01:28:54 UTC
I WAS SOOO NOT EXPECTING THIS. D:
Yunho, how could you?!
and Siwon's actually the investigator?
Of course we want an alternate ending.
;___________________;
thanks for the update.

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takelo14 December 17 2010, 03:17:01 UTC
yes i will write an alternative ending by tomorrow i think :)

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takelo14 December 17 2010, 03:09:19 UTC
whoah XD
spot is all your bb <3

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kwlubvy December 17 2010, 01:27:14 UTC
This is sad...first jae dies and yungin went crazy...I like it but yunho in my opinion did not learn anything seems like he got what he wanted revenge:( please have alternative ending its too sad...thankyu this is great writing felt every emotion

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takelo14 December 17 2010, 03:15:41 UTC
aw thats like the best compliment you can give a writer :)
since im outta school for two weeks, ill try to write alternte ending tomorrow
thanks for commenting <3

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kpopbee December 17 2010, 01:45:16 UTC
U'r really fast. I'm happy to see the sequel.
brb, i'll go read it! ^^

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kpopbee December 17 2010, 02:06:44 UTC
Yunho really gave his soul to Hell! Can't believe he's a sadist bastard! Really poor Jae, what did he do in his previous life...

Now that's im thinking, an alternative ending would be nice ^^
Thanks for the story ^^

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takelo14 December 17 2010, 03:14:04 UTC
man, i feel like a sadist T_T
now that i read it over, i will most definitly write a sequel
thanks for commenting bb :)

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kpopbee December 17 2010, 22:46:53 UTC
don'worry sometimes it happens to me too...
But Thanks for another sequel! I will definitely be back to read it ^^

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anneleigh December 17 2010, 04:13:31 UTC
i didn't expect this..its so sad...
yunho is such a sadistic...creature.
this guy has a serious case of psychological problem...but i can see why he became a sadistic bastard ...
poor jae T_T

and yes please, we do want an alternate ending...

p.s...i really like how you write the killing part,its so detailed and gory..*evil laugh*
thanks a lot.....^_^v

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takelo14 December 17 2010, 06:16:15 UTC
Yeah I don't think this is the best ending... O_O
When I finished typing it, I felt evil for doing it D:
I'll update tomorrow
Thnx for reading <3

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ultamatempa December 17 2010, 04:44:09 UTC
yunho's a really disturbed individual. we'll leave it at that.

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takelo14 December 17 2010, 06:23:11 UTC
Blame me bb, it's all my fault yunho became so messed up :'x

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