The Warrior Elite- Chapter 10

[takelo14]

Title: The Warrior Elite
Pairing: yunjae, yoosu (after chapter 1)
Genre: Angst, Violence, SMUT
Length: (9/?)
Rating: PG 13
Warning: Violence, con-consent., Dark themes, Attmepted Suicide

Summary: Yunho lives in a warrior tribe. Violence is no stranger, and wars are a constant thing in the everyday life. Jung yunho is the son of a powerful leader in

Comments

[takelo14]

SPOT for daigensha-akuma <33333

[ouji]

oh my the scene really is drastically dramatic as you say it is!! o___o!! i can see why you hate it and i really dislike the yunjae separation but your angst is STILL VERY MUCH IN TACT DEAR! *___* oh gawd, i still feel the riled up tingling in my spine and probably some tears if i didn't tell them to go away xD it's so effin sad that jaejoong is still thinking of yunho even though he's getting beaten up ;_____; (hugs him) i was seriously hoping for yunho to make an excuse to kill kangsoo for punching yoochun >:D but then i guess you wouldn't be able to get second angsty part unless it's something to do with yoochun? 8D

lol this is a very exciting chapter and DON'T DOUBT YOUR ANGST SKILLS! IT'S STILL VERY LOVELY FOR THE STORY!!~ ; A ;

[takelo14]

Yah, it wasn't too pleasant to write this... I hadn't even planned this... T_T
*nods* that was honestly the only part I thought was sad enough, his thoughts about yunho.
I promise I'll make something bad happen to kangsoo next chapter...
Man, I love reading your awesomely long comments XD makes me feel good <33333

[ouji]

lol don't worry, not everything is always planned out :) and the unexpected parts really gave this a good flare to the chapter^^ yup, pretty much the jaejoong's thoughts is the only thing that feels angsty(even though he was getting beaten up) ;__; really can't wait to see the next chapter where kangsoon gets it and congrats on finally almost reaching up that this point! xD

you better be feeling good dear because i'm never gonna stop my long rambling in these comments lol

[mourningtea]

OMG! Please, somebody resolve this horrible situation, let this bastard die! Poor little Jaejoong, it was sooo hard to read this chapter especially the torture part.

[takelo14]

I feel so bad >_< but kangsoo is gonna get beat up in the next chapter so yay ^_^
thanks for reading bb <33333

[jaejoongs_grl]

;~; poor JJ!! Yunho do something!!! *sobs in a corner*

[takelo14]

Next chapter bb !!! I promise to beat up kangsoo!!!!
Thanks for reading <3333333

[kwlubvy]

You kidding?? I was bawling my eyes out when jae was smiling remembering yun...my god this is sad:`(
When will the torture end for jae*sigh* thankyu!!

[takelo14]

*hands tissue box* I'm so sorry bb *hug* but I promise, kangsoo is going to be beaten to a pulp next chapter *yay*
thanks for reading <3333333

[wing_ting_chan]

;__; Why must Jae be treated so badly ;__;
Wahhh! bb, tell Yunnie to save him, I have tears forming in my eyes T___T
Pleaseeeee, reading about Joongie being hurt really... hurts =[

(Is it okay if I add you?)

[takelo14]

He will be saved! That is a promise!!! <333 kangsoo is going to get it next chapter !!!
P.s ofcourse, u added u bb <333333
thanks for reading ^^