[Fanfiction] Speechless

[takegamiteijiro]

Title: Speechless
Author: takegamiteijiro
Rating: PG
Genre: Fluffy Angst?
Warnings: Angst
Summary: Even without a voice, Gackt has the strength to hang on.
Word Count: 1281

Fandom: J-Rock
Character/Pairing: Gackt x Hyde

Side Note: I'm not too fond of writing things at no-o'clock in the morning because they usually come out badly, but... ^^;

Comments

[saurgristiel]

That was sad but so... fluffy. "Fluffy Angst" is perfect ^_^

And except for a couple of missed words/spellings, it's perfect!

*wipes eyes* *cuddles Gackt*

[takegamiteijiro]

Instances of spellingfail go up drastically with lack of sleep/time of writing. Can I ask where the spellingfail is though? I'll fix it if I can find it, but I just went through and failed to find said errors, but I'm also in bed at the moment and about to sleep so checking was probably a useless thing to do at the moment, lol... I need to learn not to write at night o_o

other than that, I'm glad you enjoyed it~~!

[saurgristiel]

Oh, I know how spellingfail goes ^_^

Umm... I could tell you more tomorrow *when I've printed it off and read it in bed, and marked it*, but the one off the top of my head is:
-""I'm sorry I was so late," Hyde offered when they broke apart, and it was only then that Gackt realised there was something lover's other hand, hidden behind his back."
Something IN his lover's hand. Yeah XD
-And I think there was a "be" instead of a "he", but maybe that was another story...

I can tell you better tomorrow ^^;