FILL: That Ocean is Not Silent Part 1/2 (Erik/Charles) NC-17atavistiqueJuly 21 2011, 09:30:51 UTC
They have somehow ended up in one hotel room with a double bed. This may or may not have had something to do with Charles’ subtly hopeful mental nudges to the concierge when they were booking themselves into what the woman assured them was the last room available.
In any case, Charles makes himself comfortable on the bed and sips his Darjeeling (plane flights always dehydrates him so) as Erik disappears into the bathroom to freshen up before they go meet their new recruit; his mind carelessly registers fragments of Erik’s quiet self-commentatory as he shaves, combs his hair, takes a piss and sweeps out the wrinkles of his trousers.
He is already standing up, ready to go, when Erik emerges in his waistcoat and shirtsleeves, and takes Charles’ breath momentarily away.
Is that a three-piece suit?
Bespoke, Erik projects back, a small but distinctly smug smile tugging at the corner of his lips. “Thought I had better make a good impression
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Re: FILL: That Ocean is Not Silent Part 2/2 (Erik/Charles) NC-17atavistiqueJuly 21 2011, 09:36:32 UTC
He is dimly aware of Erik kneeling down on the carpet, and feels his erection jump in anticipation, the wetness staining the front of his underwear. Erik sends him an image of himself through his eyes, mouth red and hair disheveled, shirt halfway unbuttoned, and Erik, still impeccably dressed, his long fingers freeing Charles’ -
Erik tongues at the head for one lonely moment, then swallows him in one take, and Charles really does cry out. He tries to clutch at Erik’s hair, but is swatted away.
Be good for me, Charles, Erik purrs in his mind, and it’s all he could do not to come on the spot at the intimacy of their thoughts, minds melding into one passion, tight and wound together like two strands of string in a rope. He seizes the back of a chair for support and lets out a barely-muffled groan as Erik’s tongue swipes across the underside of his hardness, licking, sucking, hot and tight and taking him impossibly deep - Charles’ head snaps back; his mind is gone, a litany of yessohotsogoodyeserikgodyesOpen your eyes, he hears, and
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Re: FILL: That Ocean is Not Silent Part 2/2 (Erik/Charles) NC-17atavistiqueJuly 21 2011, 12:11:35 UTC
Hahaha, thank you <3 So glad to know you liked it! I never knew writing porn was this mortifying, it creates a whole new level of respect for my favourite writers...
In any case, Charles makes himself comfortable on the bed and sips his Darjeeling (plane flights always dehydrates him so) as Erik disappears into the bathroom to freshen up before they go meet their new recruit; his mind carelessly registers fragments of Erik’s quiet self-commentatory as he shaves, combs his hair, takes a piss and sweeps out the wrinkles of his trousers.
He is already standing up, ready to go, when Erik emerges in his waistcoat and shirtsleeves, and takes Charles’ breath momentarily away.
Is that a three-piece suit?
Bespoke, Erik projects back, a small but distinctly smug smile tugging at the corner of his lips. “Thought I had better make a good impression ( ... )
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Erik tongues at the head for one lonely moment, then swallows him in one take, and Charles really does cry out. He tries to clutch at Erik’s hair, but is swatted away.
Be good for me, Charles, Erik purrs in his mind, and it’s all he could do not to come on the spot at the intimacy of their thoughts, minds melding into one passion, tight and wound together like two strands of string in a rope. He seizes the back of a chair for support and lets out a barely-muffled groan as Erik’s tongue swipes across the underside of his hardness, licking, sucking, hot and tight and taking him impossibly deep - Charles’ head snaps back; his mind is gone, a litany of yessohotsogoodyeserikgodyesOpen your eyes, he hears, and ( ... )
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This was really nicely done, I second the call to keep at it - this is a wonderful first attempt!
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That was AMAZINGLY HAWT!!
Don't you dare be ashamed of that! Soooo freakin' perfect!
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And HNNGG JAMES WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO US WHYYYY
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Keep at it, please.
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ERIK GIVING CHARLES A BLOWJOB OH MY GOD HELLO PERFECTION INDEED.
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I was afraid it might be a little OOC to be honest, but apparently noone minds XD
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