Comments | tahariel: FIC: Asymptote, Kirk/Spock, R

tahariel

FIC: Asymptote, Kirk/Spock, R

Jun 30, 2009 13:52

Title: Asymptote

Fandom: STXI

Pairing: Kirk/Spock

Word Count: 5974

Rating: R / NC-17, for language and sex

Warnings: None

Author's Notes: I hadn't written anything in months when I started this, and haven't written fanfic in years. But somehow Star Trek has got me going again - which I'm totally loving, because I really missed writing! Thanks ( Read more... )

slash, kirk/spock, meme, my fic, writing, star trek xi, fanfic

Comments 132

stripedpetunia June 30 2009, 21:16:36 UTC

*fans self*

One of my favourite products of the kink meme, I think.

tahariel July 1 2009, 18:54:36 UTC

High praise indeed, considering how awesome most of the kink meme has been. Thank you - it means a lot to hear that :)

rhaegal June 30 2009, 22:23:33 UTC

That was awesome. The painful UST, the maths references (♥)...guh.

tahariel July 1 2009, 18:55:25 UTC

The math references have been surprisingly popular, something I didn't really expect. They just sort of happened, so I'm glad they've gone down so well (cough like Jim cough)

rhaegal July 1 2009, 19:52:50 UTC

You mean there are geeks in Trek fandom? Well, I never... ;-)

svilleficrecs July 1 2009, 08:37:57 UTC

WOW. UST like whoa. My favorite kind. That was just TASTY.

tahariel July 1 2009, 18:55:59 UTC

Order up for table twelve!

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)

slyprentice July 1 2009, 18:14:06 UTC

I rather think my icon is totally appropriate for this story, which was absolutely stunning! I love how pinpoint focused Spock seemed to be in this. I can't imagine how hard it would be for him to realize that he was missing Kirk touching him, especially since the captain does it so casually most people would hardly notice.

Seriously, bravo and well done! :)

tahariel July 1 2009, 18:56:30 UTC

Love the icon, though Spock smiling makes me weirdly uncomfortable 0-0

I'm really glad you liked it, thanks for the lovely feedback :)

slyprentice July 1 2009, 19:06:36 UTC

I know what you mean about the Spock smiling bit. The first time I watched the unaired pilot with Spock smiling and being sociable I spent the entire time like "(o.0) wha?" lol

tahariel July 1 2009, 19:10:42 UTC

I just want to slap him round the face and say 'Snap out of it, man! Are you on drugs? Do we have to have an intervention?'

aqueousserenade July 1 2009, 19:40:25 UTC

Oh wow this was fantastic!
A good twist on the ol' cliché.

I seriously spent a good minute trying to remember what asymptotes were. "Lets see it has something to do with graphs..."
When I remembered I was like "Oh!...OH!!!! What an appropriate title! :D" Venn diagrams to!

The UST was excellent. I felt like I was trembling along with Spock!
"Touch him, Kirk! D:<"

And, of course, when they did it was major hawt.
Great job!

tahariel July 2 2009, 13:29:24 UTC

Thank you very much :) I'm really pleased you liked it!