Comments | taennyn: Wild Roses fic prompt 007 "Days"

taennyn

Wild Roses fic prompt 007 "Days"

May 06, 2007 13:46

Title: this place
'Verse/characters: Wild Roses; Isael, Ruadhan
Prompt: 007 "Days"
Word Count: 465
Rating: all ages
Notes: follows previous. Four more to follow this one.

( Reaching bought him the roof of the Keep itself )

isael, 100 original fics

Comments 10

darthneko May 6 2007, 20:56:25 UTC

So fascinating! It's unlike any other prose I can think of right now, but in a good way, a way that sweeps you up and carries you along, even when you're not sure what's going on, and then rewards you for sticking with it by plopping you back down in ways that make all the puzzle pieces suddenly fall into place and make sense. Like drifting in a sort of whirlwind and then bam! bouts of clarity. It's very engaging to the reader brain.

taennyn May 6 2007, 20:58:16 UTC

I was actually trying to think of anyone my writing reminded me of, and came up distressingly blank. >.>

Thak you. :)

darthneko May 6 2007, 21:01:59 UTC

Bah! Not distressing, distinctive! ^___^ You are, in fact, a unique tae. Which is the best sort.

taennyn May 6 2007, 21:17:16 UTC

. . . there's other sorts of taes?

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billradish May 6 2007, 22:40:41 UTC

What was the cathedral to both of them? And what directed the places they went?

It's neat, and has a definite feeling of compromises, but no real feeling of what or who the driving force behind their moving was.

taennyn May 6 2007, 22:45:38 UTC

it was the cathedral/chapel attached to the castle Isael grew up in. Ruadhan, every time he wound up having to go in there, would get twitchy as hell because of the slightly different way the locals used candles for remembrance. Isael it's half 'this is a familiar place' half 'ow'.

Memories/desires for 'safe' or comfortable places.

I'll work on that in the editing.