Wild Roses fic prompt 006 "Hours"

May 01, 2007 19:57

Title: parent's child
'Verse/characters: Wild Roses; Isael, (Ruadhan)
Prompt: 006 "Hours"
Word Count: 350
Rating: PG
Notes: follows in the sequence established here.

He spared a second )

isael, 100 original fics

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taennyn May 2 2007, 04:13:53 UTC
either his subconscious decided that the less physical-tension-fed headache the better, or his father's trying to root him in reality. Not actually sure which. >.>

Thank you. I rather thought so.

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klgaffney May 2 2007, 19:48:49 UTC
there needs to be a word that hangs between an admiring "niiiice" as far as the telling, and the "ouch" of the reaction. i like the way it ended, with no way of knowing how real the real was.

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taennyn May 2 2007, 19:56:47 UTC
Thank you. I've been struggling with this progression for a really long time; 's damnably hard to translate the feel of the frayed strings to text, instead of feel.

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