Grass Fire - Chapter 12

[taemun]

Title: Grass Fire
Pairing: YunJae
Length: 12/?
Genre: Historical AU, Adventure, Romance, Drama, Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Prostitution, Rape, Slavery
Disclaimer: Based on the graphic novel Habibi by Craig Thompson

Summary: Since the night he caught Yunho mid-air, Jaejoong has never once lost his fighting spirit. With nothing but an old family

Comments

[ligerliger]

UUIXCYRXUR?!????

[ligerliger]

OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH I AM SO EXCITED FOR JAE ;___

[taemun]

Hehe I'm really glad you liked this plot, it's the part that's not from the original work and I was..hhehehehe...kinda proud of it xD I don't really like characters that are solely evil so I tried to create some kind of background story for the bad guys in this story too :'D As for why the chief is acting like he is... Well, he's a pretty mysterious person so I don't think we will get more information about his motives that what we already know :) I think you're right about him realising Jae will never be queen Anu... And he was also getting more and more paranoid about others trying to overthrow him and also he wants to get his son back :D

Yay for Jaejoong getting a chance at a new kind of life :DD

Thank you for reading^^ And you are always so sweet <3

[shin_ah_mi]

thank you for updating ^^
so many years passed, and yet they are still apart, it makes their reunion so much anticipated...now i wonder how did yunho went through these years too.
jaejoong's faith seems to get better, he has this chance now to take another path!
wish him good luck
^^
thank you

[taemun]

Yes, so many years have passed, but we needed to give Yunho time to grow up so that Jaejoong wouldn't see him just as his own son :D

Yes, for Jaejoong a chance has arisen :D

Thank you for reading^^

[hellokittyjyj]

jaejoong may finally get some sense of freedom.
maybe he will even get to see yunho again.

thanks for updating

[taemun]

Yes, he will have another kind of life now, hopefully :) And he will see Yunho... one day sooner or later :D

Thank you for reading^^

[asafecracker]

HAbfthdbfftt! You updated...

...and he really got a guts, isnt he? the scribe.

the chief also something else, i like it how you make him more 'easy to digest' compared to sultan (he's funny, i like him)... reading the comment on how other dislike Lata; when shes a 'good one', got me wondering how sultan will be perceived if you stick to that.
maybe it will come off as too one dimensional and excessive?

Thank you for the update! good luck on the next chapter

[taemun]

Haha, I did xD

Haha, you are right :'D I kind of imagined the scribe as this old man who doesn't care about wordly matters and is only interested in his books... So he doesn't care even if the chief killed him, he considers that he has already lived his life :)

You noticed that :) I don't exactly like characters that are pretty much only evil... That's kind of boring in my opinion. So I wanted to change up the original sultan a bit :D

Thank you for reading^^

[phinea2009]

I'm happy you updated ... Twice even. Missed your writing tremendously.

I'm still curious about the state of Yunho's jewels. Heechul's pitiful ... Depended upon yet scorned. I hope wherever the body thief is taking Yunho will be nearer to his beloved Jaejooong.

There seems to be hope that Jaejoong will finally escape the harem.

Looking forward to the next update.

[taemun]

Awww, thank you :3 I missed updating and receiving my readers' thoughts too :)

Yunho's kidnapping might indeed end up important in getting YunJae in the same place again :) And Jaejoong, yes, he got a chance to change his life a bit, now.

Thank you for reading^^