Grass Fire - Chapter 11

Jul 25, 2013 23:02

Title: Grass Fire
Pairing: YunJae
Length: 11/?
Genre: Historical AU, Adventure, Romance, Drama, Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Prostitution, Rape, Slavery
Disclaimer: Based on the graphic novel Habibi by Craig Thompson

Summary: Since the night he caught Yunho mid-air, Jaejoong has never once lost his fighting spirit. With nothing but an old family ( Read more... )

☂ title: grass fire, ❄ band: dbsk, ♫ fanfic, ♡ yunjae

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asafecracker July 26 2013, 07:04:15 UTC
Finished reading 'Habibi' last week, it was tragic beautiful and frustrating for me, eventhough i love the ending...
have to tell you that i really really hope Yunho might lead a different life that Cham. a little bit hopeful in the earlier chapter so Yunho wont make the same mistake due to awful confusion and misunderstanding... and yunho please dont get fat

but then 'Sulekha' happen. wails..

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taemun July 26 2013, 08:14:31 UTC
Hahahahaha I love the part "and yunho please dont get fat" xDDDDD Just a little but chubby is okay, right? :'D Like a little cute yunbelly :33

I can only say that as you probably noticed already, I have changed Jaejoong's story a lot. :) And, when Yunho's story remains very similar to Cham's it's not completely the same either :) So, you will still have to wait to know what really happened!

Thank you for reading^^

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asafecracker July 26 2013, 13:04:57 UTC
"a little cute yunbelly :33" would be much welcomed...

YAY!! you just gave me hope. not that I dont love Cham, theres a beauty in that love and tragedy. but I wish something a little bit 'better' for Jae *winks2*....
of course i will wait happily! I love your alterations! Good luck.

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fangirling118 July 26 2013, 09:36:18 UTC
OH HOLY SHIT ! You updated !! \O/ *sohappyrightnow* sngssjjdjxhffhfhfhdhjxjjj Did Yunho lost his virginity to Heechul? o.O I didn't see that coming . But it's good he had someone like Heechul to tell him there is nothing bad in wanting Jaejoong :') Our Yunho is a man now and a good dancer ,too! I feel so sad of what happened to Heechul , she didn't deserve it at all . :[ She worked so hard for them and Leta continue to treat her bad . I have mixed feelings for Leta , it's good she took care of Yunho but her opinions weren't any good to Yunho. And thank goodness the man took Yunho in order to sell him . I don't think having sex with men for money would do any good to Yunho, he would depsise sex even more . I wonder though if Leta and the other knew he was going to take him away or not ? If they didn't then this would be a very unfortunate suprise for them. :/ I hope he would sell him where Jaejoong is now . Also, I hope Yunho would see Heechul again in the future ;^; Can't wait till next week ( ... )

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taemun July 26 2013, 10:12:43 UTC
Haha yes, it seems like he did :'D Heechul is a good first partner to have, I bet :DD And yeah, she didn't deserve the abuse she got at all :( Lata is really a complicated figure in both her and Yunho's lives... Sometimes she provides shelter, but sometimes she only makes things worse D:

I agree with you fully, having sex with men for money would definitely not help Yunho to gain a healhty attitude towards sex >___< He's traumatised enough as it is ( ... )

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suju_sapna July 26 2013, 09:39:28 UTC
Hey! Long time no see!!
I hope your fine!
I think I need to re read the last chapters...
But I DIY. Remember is Heechul really a girl or a eunuch ??

I feel so sorry for Yunho and his feelings, even though he had been kidnap (maybe sold?) I think that's the bet way for him right?

Waiting for the next chapter about JJ!!

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taemun July 26 2013, 10:16:37 UTC
Long time no see~~ I'm fine, I hope you are doing well too :)

Yeah I think some re-reading might be needed, it's been what, two months since last posted?^^; oTL

Heechul is an eunuch like all the people in that house, but they are all living their lives as women :) I guess in today's terms they would appear close to transgender.

Thank you for reading^^

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muramatsu_aoi July 26 2013, 16:05:46 UTC
/grips head in hands and runs around/

since you saved Yunho's balls, they are in my safekeeping /grabs them/

that's a definite tug-of-war Heechul & Lata are playing now.. for Yunho, his sexuality is a burden and has become something to be reviled.. May I hope Heechul has taught him only second-base things? /puppy eyes/ I soo wanted Jae to be the one to initiate him..

Jae is in Mongolia and Yunho in India.. it's going to be a long time before they meet. And when they do, Yunho has figuratively tossed away all his innocence ..

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taemun July 27 2013, 07:48:06 UTC
Haha xD I'm pretty sure Yunho would like to use his balls himself!!

You are so right about Yunho's thoughts of his own sexuality :/ Heechul tried her best, but... I guess it will still take Yunho some time before he can accept himself, with sexual thoughts and all. As for ow far they got 8) Well, I guess I will leave it to your imagination xD At least for now.

They are far away from each other indeed... But the time of their reunion is getting much closer :)

Thank you for reading^^

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youinmyjumpsuit July 26 2013, 17:05:27 UTC
HOLLLLLLLLLLLLY. Baptism of fire for our lovely. Nuuuuu!!!
I hope he manages to escape before someone lays a hand on him..huhu

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taemun July 27 2013, 07:50:26 UTC
Hmm, well, we don't know what purpose he was taken away for? ;D Maybe no-one wants to lay a hand on our lovely Yunho :)

Or maybe they want to make him a sex slave like Jaejoong D:

Thank you for reading ^^

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