Grass Fire - Chapter 8

[taemun]

Title: Grass Fire
Pairing: YunJae
Length: 8/?
Genre: Historical AU, Adventure, Romance, Drama, Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Prostitution, Rape, Slavery
Disclaimer: Based on the graphic novel Habibi by Craig Thompson

Summary: Since the night he caught Yunho mid-air, Jaejoong has never once lost his fighting spirit. With nothing but an old family

Comments

[borborygmus5000]

omg i've been lurking around for this update!

[taemun]

haha i guess i updated a bit later than normally :3 ...not that i ever had a pattern lol

[borborygmus5000]

I'm kinda hooked to this story at the moment, and from what I recall you usually post the new chapters on Saturday?

It's a little heartbreaking, the juxtaposition of Yunho's pining for Jaejoong in the previous chapter and Jaejoong's resolve to leave all associations with Yunho behind in order to find a will to survive. Jaejoong's fiery spirit here is extremely admirable, and I suspect it is precisely this trait (and his immeasurable beauty) that earns him an important rank within the Grand chief's harem? I don't know what the dynamics will be like since the Grand Chief is described as an unpredictable man, and I look forward to future plot developments. I really love the way you conveyed the intensity of Jaejoong's first meeting with the Grand Chief.

And I look forward to reading more (:

[taemun]

yeah i guess it's saturday lately, or in my time zone sometimes late friday night :) ...or more like saturday, but i still count it as friday since it's before i go to sleep xD

there is a large contrast in their ways to cope indeed... and we can see where yunho's way brought him; very sick and weak :( jaejoong is more exprienced and maybe he thinks he wouldn't survive being in such a state, since he is so used to fighting for himself (unlike yunho, who always had jaejoong to fight in his stead...)

jaejoong's life is going to go through changes, sooner or later...and his courage might play a part in that :)

thank you for reading^^

[hattukissa]

Mine~

[hattukissa]

Aigoo.. *shakes head in despair* I'm really frightened by Jaejoong's stubbornness ;^; Hopefully the chief likes him enough not to kill him when Jaejoong starts acting up.. ;^; I like his character (this story wouldn't be that interesting if he wasn't a stubborn mule like that XD) but I'm just so worried something bad is going to happen because of that ;___; I really hope we won't have to go through like 5 Jaejoong chapters of like.. mere torture and rape >___< maybe he can find a friend in that woman who was assigned to take care of him. Maybe Bataar will even end up running off with his beloved and saving Jaejoong too! I really don't see much other possibilities for him to escape. Unless he becomes like.. fat and ugly and the chief won't want him anymore D: (kind of hard to imagine that though

[taemun]

Hahaha I was laughing so much thorughout this comment, I loved all your speculations... But I have to say this time you pretty much got everything wrong xD I guess it's a good story when no one can guess (since this Jaejoong part is all my story I can boast a little :3) ;D Neverthless, keep them coming :D

[fangirling118]

Spottttt (my first time doing the spot thing \O/ )

[fangirling118]

It took me a week to leave a comment ,shame on me .T_T
Anyway, what I love about Jae's character in this fic is that it's totally diffrend from what I have been used to read . In most yj fics Jae is fragile or so emotional but in this one he has such a strong personality .
When he refused to bow down to chief , I felt so proud of him . Also , I wonder how will yunjae met again :S
Okay , I go now to read today's update !!

[taemun]

Awe, don't worry!!^^ You've left me so many comments before anyway, you sweet person :3 And congrats on your first spot ever xD

I have to say that even though I sometimes enjoy reading about those fragile or emotional characters... I don't find that interesting to write. There needs to be some balance... I haven't ever met a person who doesn't have at least some kind of strenght in them. Especially, since Jaejoong is undoubtedly usually the "girl"... I strongly dislike the idea that girls are/should be like the that @____@

Thank you for reading^^

[jaejungjong]

Spot!

[jaejungjong]

Omfg Jae is becoming a part of the harems hfsjfkgkl. So, this is where the prostitution starts? D': Gdi can Yunho grow up faster and find Jaejoong with all his might sobs. Jae is too beautiful to be dismissed by the Chief. Ugh.

Thanks for this update!

[phinea2009]

In spite of his dire situation, Jaejoong still has this fiery spirit. I hope this spirit coupled with his beauty will make his life a little easier.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[taemun]

Jaejoong's fiery spirit is there, and will always be... but losing Yunho might have smothered it a little.

Thank you for reading^^