Okay...I just have to say this to you. Please don't take this wrong, okay...
RARELY do I see a crossover that I like. Usually they are awkward and the writer wants to write from one of the two fandoms and the other side becomes more of a caricture of the characters.
You did not do that, so that gets some points.
Your grammatical issues are a bit like having nails on a blackboard.
Star fleet officer - Starfleet is one word. Always has been. Always will be. To a Trek-addict, nothing is worse than this being misspelled.
star ship - This is one word when referring to a ship in the Star Trek ethos. Though elsewhere, it has been known to separate.
Overall, this is a total 'WTF?!?' story if I ever saw one. To that end...we shall bestow it with a rating of 2, and hope it does not happen again.
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RARELY do I see a crossover that I like. Usually they are awkward and the writer wants to write from one of the two fandoms and the other side becomes more of a caricture of the characters.
You did not do that, so that gets some points.
Your grammatical issues are a bit like having nails on a blackboard.
Star fleet officer - Starfleet is one word. Always has been. Always will be. To a Trek-addict, nothing is worse than this being misspelled.
star ship - This is one word when referring to a ship in the Star Trek ethos. Though elsewhere, it has been known to separate.
Overall, this is a total 'WTF?!?' story if I ever saw one. To that end...we shall bestow it with a rating of 2, and hope it does not happen again.
Ugh....
PS - I love you.
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