Alright...first off. Booooo! on not writing the second part right away of a KILLER story. However, I think you could stretch the piss out of the sixth doctor story, and perhaps make a four-part serial out of it. Anyhoo...
This is trite. Not dull or useless, but trite. It does nothing, and it goes nowhere. It's patter, fluff, or perhaps just filler. The characters are on, and the references made to past adventures are always good in Doctor Who. It's just not there. It also ends on a rather confusing note. I see the potential here. It could turn into something extraordinary.
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This is trite. Not dull or useless, but trite. It does nothing, and it goes nowhere. It's patter, fluff, or perhaps just filler. The characters are on, and the references made to past adventures are always good in Doctor Who. It's just not there. It also ends on a rather confusing note. I see the potential here. It could turn into something extraordinary.
Rating: 4/10 (mainly for effort).
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