Drabble/Oneshot

[tabi]

Title: What's Love?
Rating: PG-13, to be safe
Pairing: TOP/G-Dragon
Start Note: Something I thought of at random.

Comments

[poetanarchy]

FIRST

[poetanarchy]

And you already know what I think, thief. ♥

[tabi]

Pfft. Shut up. :< Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.

[poetanarchy]

>:{

♥

You know I love it and you.

Someday, lets do a psl with my Chaeyeon and TOP...like a plot one. Cause I have ideas for her that I'll never be able to play out with the comms and she has a natural like of TOP and... :/ Yes the fact her icon came up alphabetically brought this on

[jemnise]

HOLY FUCKING GOOD HEAVENS THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.

[jemnise]

simple yet astounding. every line, every word is screaming reality inside my head. For this moment I think everything's real. Its like you dug deep down inside Kwon Ji Yong's mind, a thing no one can ever do.

oh jeez. i am soo throwing this one to my favorites <333

[tabi]

asbsafjhegabfgjh. Omo, I'm so flattered. :> Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it haha.

That person up there though helped me out with figuring him out. GD always seems like such a layered person, to me. More complicated than anyone thinks.

... something like that. Thanks once again!

[jemnise]

<333 hahahaha you bet I do :D I need and want moar fics like this one :)

He looks simple yet his brain is just so hard to comprehend. People think they know what's going on, when they are not even that close. Oh the mystery of GD.

hahahaha :D thank YOU for this :)

[humancloning]

it's really beautifull *_*

he doesn’t realize that Choi Seunghyun is above him.

I loved this sentence

[tabi]

Yes... hehe. >.> I wanted to make it a double entrendre but I think the whole drabble is too angsty for something like that.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :]

[lovelyable]

I like this reflection a lot. It kind of feels unfinished to me, but maybe that's how it's supposed to be, a fragment of Jiyong's thoughts to himself before his ADD slash busy schedule moves him onto something else XD.

I kind of picture GD & TOP's relationship a lot like this, or maybe the other way around, but either way, you kind of nailed it on the head and in such deceptively simple language. I would have liked to see you include some descriptions of them that are not based at night and in Seunghyun's bed, just to round things out--unless everything only happens under those circumstances, in which case... don't listen to me lmfao.

I hope you plan on writing more GTOP after this bb because once you write something and I like it, I pretty much expect more from you >DDD.

[tabi]

I thought it felt unfinished too but then I decided to just smile and nod at the possibility that it's meant to be like this. >.> My betareader is useless as well; she said nothing was wrong.

Hmm. For me, when I was writing this, I really couldn't see them doing something else other than sex or anything in the day bc really, GD is a busy man. >.> He doesn't seem like he would want to do anything with TOP that isn't in their job scope during the day. It's what I feel anyway but I am working on a sort of sequel in TOP's pov. I hope it flows as smoothly as this one, is all.

... errrrrr. We'll see. ~__~ I've been experiencing really bad writer's block as of late so when I wrote this, I surprised myself with how coherent it turned out. I do want to write more though but YOU better keep the GTOP coming too.
And yes, this piece was slightly inspired by Requiem for the Rising Tied.

[lovelyable]

Ooh. Well, a lot of people like different styles, it's possible she liked the fragmented feeling, which isn't wrong anyways XD. Also, I can be your beta! But when I step into editor shoes I can get pretty harsh, which isn't me being a bitch, it's just the way I critique. So if you don't want that I understand too.

I do see how they would have absolute zero lover!interaction in the day. In that case maybe you could have addressed it somewhere in the fic?

Looking forward to the sequel!
Bahhaha, it was? /embarrassed - Except Jiyong's much more the mywayorthehighway! guy in this one, which I like. :3

[tabi]

I would rather a betareader be harsh than constantly assure me that nothing is wrong and everything is fine. :\ I betaread for a writer (not in this fandom though) and I always tell her beforehand that I will be harsh and correct things and etc. Haha. Is there a way for me to contact you though?

Maybe the sequel. :] This oneshot drabble is done and I can't see myself adding anything else to it.

It was! I think your RfTRT was very believable, imho. Especially considering how I can't really see these boys being very lover-ish. I mean, via observation, TOP is much more affectionate towards Daesung now? His interaction with GD is pretty minimal. I don't know, I see a lot of obstacles between them that might prevent them from having a normal relationship per se. cranperryjuice's Car Crash Hearts is also a fic that I personally feel nails GTOP's relationship on the head well

[heatherxwho]

this was really well-written stuff.
beautiful actually. i want to read
it again. ^__^

[tabi]

Thank you. :D I feel honored that you like it so much to re-read it again.