This is the fourth story in my Kept!verse, in which Jeff's a billionaire, Jensen's a princess and Jared's the long suffering bodyguard. It follows Make me a match Title: Sound the alarm Author:
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Yay! You updated. Been waiting for this to come along. :-)
Again, great chapter! I like the how all the security team is so attuned to Jensen's moods that they all anticipate his reactions. I also love how even when Jensen was angry at being excluded at the meeting he was still thoughtful towards Jared and two recovering from the flu.
Can't wait to read more! Rarely do I get into WIPs but I can't seem to wait for this to finish. :-)
I'm glad you're bringing up the way that Jensen is being treated like a child (and linking it to the way that he acts like a child)...I don't want Jensen to be a cliched, helpless little twink, and I think you're doing a good job of showing how someone could display those characteristics without actually being that way inside.
(does that make sense? - I totally mean this as a compliment, so if it comes across as a criticism, I wrote it wrong!)
Yay. That was a wonderful update. It had everything, a little lovin, a little action, a little angst. I love your Jeff and Jensen. Jensen's friendship with Jared is adorable as well. I can't wait to find out who the heck is after Jeff.
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Again, great chapter! I like the how all the security team is so attuned to Jensen's moods that they all anticipate his reactions. I also love how even when Jensen was angry at being excluded at the meeting he was still thoughtful towards Jared and two recovering from the flu.
Can't wait to read more! Rarely do I get into WIPs but I can't seem to wait for this to finish. :-)
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i so want to know who is after jeff
and loving their relationship
and jeared as the buddy
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(does that make sense? - I totally mean this as a compliment, so if it comes across as a criticism, I wrote it wrong!)
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Thanks for posting, this verse remains really, really good!
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