'The Song of the Treadmill' - part twelve! At last.

[tabaqui]

Wheeeeeeeeee! So late. I have *guilt* when i don't post, which is probably dumb, but...there it is! Seems like the holidays got me all discombobulated, and then i've been fighting this freaking *cough* since November... I'm now on *way* too many meds, but it's only for a week! And then maybe i'll be well! Yay

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[sweptawaybayou]

Sam dug his fingers in, up under Dean's shirts, fingertips catching at muscle and bone. He wanted to grind against Dean until they were both breathless and boneless and sated - was shaking with how much he wanted it. "God, you...you w-want -"

"Fuck yes. I want, Sam."

this world that you have created leaves me breathless and shivering and so very chilled to the bone, but then you add in little bits of this and i am suddenly very warm. Very. Very.

Can't wait for what comes next and next and next.

*adores*

**spins you**

[tabaqui]

*hugs you muchly and hard*
Thank you so much, bay-bee.
So much.
:)

[iyalode]

Ah, Sammy's been alone too long. I really like the headspace you have him in here. The differences in this world are starting to sink in and it shows.

[tabaqui]

Yup, he really has.
Thank you so much!

[black_samvara]

Dirty? It was strictly above the waist!

[tabaqui]

:)

[gretazreta]

This whole world is so evocative: what I especially liked in this chapter was the sense of how lonely both of them have been. In Sam's case, this was in response to being in a place with people, and with Dean, his response to having Sam. It just compounds how much they need each other, and how good it is that they've found each other.

I'm kind of terrified that it can't last, that Dean's going to be left behind alone again, and Sam will have to move along again. No, no, no, no. I want them to be happy...

THe connection between them is so well-drawn and warm and kind of tender but brotherly at the same time. I was so pleased to see a new update, and it was GREAT.

[tabaqui]

*basks*
Thank you so very much!
*ratchets up the tension*

:)!

[bendtothesun]

I think I may have ditzed on the last chapter and not reviewed it so if so I want to say right not that my reaction to that was pretty much flailing in happiness. So perfect.

*ahem*

Oh Sam. Excellent, excellent writing it had *me* getting jangly and restless. You could feel Sam's tension throughout the whole chapter and it gave it a bit of a nerve-wreaking sort of edge.

Somewhere behind a shelf there was a tv on, showing the limited stuff that was available. Sam wanted to watch it and shied away from simultaneously, frankly too freaked out to confront all the differences. To see all the things they'd lost. Over all was the hum of conversation - the coming and going of the residents, the shouts and laughter of the kids playing. Music, too, and noise from the kitchen area, more cooking smells that threatened Sam's not-quite-settled stomach. Love it. He's so used to being... well a ghost really. Coming and going, never staying long enough and while at first it's a relief now life is invading and it's freaking him out. I'm guessing a

[bendtothesun]

-c-
The brother interaction was spot on as well. Per usual. I'd paste my favorite bits but that'd probably be the rest of the chapter. And I'm not saying this to add to the guilt or anything (which you shouldn't feel, sometimes it takes awhile, that's just fine) but my god, I've missed your writing.

Out of curiousity are you ever going to branch out into original works? Because I'd love to see what you could do if you have complete control over something. :)

Anyway it was amazing and just- yeah. Wow.

[tabaqui]

Ah, yay! I can't do the 'brother' thing quite so much here, obviously, as some of those instincts are just not *in* Dean, after so long, but...i'm pleased when the innate nature of it shows.

*haz guilt*
:)

I'm actually writing a couple original things right now, i'm just not spending as much time on them as i should. I hope to publish, i just need to *do eeeeeet*!!
*smooch*

[tabaqui]

Ah ha ha. I can't remember if you did, either. Terrible! But it's all good.

And yeah, Sam's used to not connecting and everything is really sort of adding up and getting to him and i'm glad about how that came through, all jittery and unsettled. Yay!
*Better* than Ms. Lee? Oh, you flatter me!
*does happy happy joy joy fangrrl dance*
Thank you thank you so very much! Your fb is just awesome.
:)